Which one would you guys rather see?
If you haven't read the rewritten chapter 30 go read it then come back.
Alright welcome back or just hi if you didn't leave haha. So which version would you guys rather see?
Just curious.
Chapter 30A (the one I wrote when I was depressed)
It was the one where Kyleigh was not happy with life and she overdosed on a few bottles of sleeping pills.
If you choose this version expect this:
Mitch will be very very affected by Kyleighs death and he will slip back in major depression along with having multiple suicide thoughts. He will also constantly have flashbacks of what he should have done to help her or what he could/should have done to prevent her death.
Kyleigh will be dead (obviously haha) and there will be a funeral scene (which I'm not thrilled to write yo)
The story will pick up with Ashley and Mitch staying at Jerome's place with him and Louise. (Both versions they both will makeup obviously brah because #merome)
Mitch looses all contact with his family besides the occasional visits with Connor and only Connor. He's greatly affected by Kyleighs suicide and his mom and Marley put the blame on him when they learn he had the chance to stop her but didn't.
Orrrrrrr
Chapter 30B (It was the one where Ashley, Mitch and Kyliegh got in a car crash.) (enough said.)
Ashley is greatly effected by what she could have done but she learns that she could have done nothing different in her situation.
Kyleigh is alive (so no funeral scene Yey) but she has a great deal of memory loss only remembering a few things pertaining to who her family is and the car crash. She is greatly affected thinking the crash was her fault because she begged and begged at Mitch to take her home. She does not get over this and she will be forever haunted by her actions.
Mitch is alive but he greatly believes he's going to die upon hearing everything that needs to happen to help him get better. Jerome, him and Louise will make up and all be friends again.
This part will be told from Mitch, Ashley and, Kyleighs POVs
So what part would you guys be curious to see?
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