Scene: Dark forest, early in the afternoon. Two boys walk down a path in the shadows of the trees.
REVIEW
Jonetsu:
I want to be called Jon.
Dotoku:
Jon it is.
Now, follow me.
CONTINUE:
Jon:
(singing while following Dotoku)
Dotoku:
Could you sing quieter?
Jon:
No, but I will sing a different song if that helps.
Dotoku:
Please, any other song would be fine.
(Jon and Dotoku continue walking to the rhythmic sound of Jon's voice.)
(Within five minutes, they arrive to the spot where Dotoku left Fon.)
Fon:
(sees Dotoku)
It's about time you got back! What were you doing?
(notices Jon)
Who is that? Why did you bring him hear? Are you trying to kill me?
Dotoku:
Of course I am not trying to kill you. I have no reason to.
Jon:
Hi, I am Jonetsu. Call me Jon.
Fon:
I am Fonix. Please, please call me Fon.
Jon:
I like your name! You both have cool names! Mine is pretty awesome, too, though.
Fon:
(relieved) At least someone likes it.
Dotoku:
Let's start walking. We need to find a city or something before night.
Jon:
I think I saw one when I was climbing a tree.
Dotoku:
And you didn't tell me because...
Jon:
I thought you liked the forest as much as I do!
Fon:
Who would like this forest? It is so creepy! And dark! And scary! And what if there are animals trying to kill us? Or people trying to kill us?
Jon:
Wow, you must like to panic! You are really good at it!
Fon:
Like panicking? LIKE panicking? How could anyone like to panic?
Dotoku:
Please, do not panic Fon anymore, Jon. And can you lead us back to that tree from before?
Jon:
I mean, I can try. It was a while ago. I have been in this forest alone for a long time. I forget which tree sees what.
Dotoku:
Have you met any other people?
Jon:
Yes, two of them have houses not far from here.
Fon:
(freaking out) And you didn't tell us this sooner?
Dotoku:
It's alright, Fon.
Now, Jon, are the people enemies?
Jon:
No, they are usually quite nice. They can be very helpful and know their way around the city.
Dotoku:
Great! Then we can go to their house, stay the night, then head out in the morning to go to the city with them!
Jon:
Sounds fun!
Fon:
Sounds dangerous!
Dotoku:
(ignores both comments and starts walking)
Author/Character:
Patty:
I don't really feel like typing anymore, it's late, and I have to get up at a decent time tomorrow.
Jon:
Sleep well!
Fon:
Don't forget to think about everything! (no pressure)
Dotoku:
Get all the rest you need, Patty.
Credits:
(Song) God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen
(Image) Death the Kid
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