Tangled Diaries

Chapter 8 Maximus

Flynn's Diary

WOW!!!! That stupid horse just doesn't give up!!!! I woke up today and that dumb horse was soaking wet and standing over me!!! STALKER!!! And he tried to drag me away and attempted to steal my boot!!! But then blondey, I mean Rapunzel, just walked up to him and made him sit and drop my boot. How did she do that?!?!?And then she started petting him and saying what a good boy he was. Come on!!!!! I tried to tell her that he was a bad horse but she said that he was just a big baby!! Seriously!! Apparently his name is Maximus and he seems to really like Rapunzel.

Rapunzel's Diary

Wow!! The best thing just happened!!! So, I woke up and there was this adorable palace horse that was dripping wet standing over Eugene. The horse tried to take Eugene's boot, but I told him to sit and stay and after some persistence, he obeyed me. So, I told him to drop the boot and he hesitantly dropped it on the ground. He was just the cutest, sweetest thing. I read his name tag and his name is Maximus. And so I petted him and he cuddled me. He was just a big baby after all. Eugene was telling me that he was a bad horse, but that's not possible! It can't be!! But I did have to tell them not to fight and they stopped fighting. (Btw, I know that they antagonize and fight with each other when I'm not looking, they think that I don't know!!)

Maximus's Diary

(Happy horse sounds)

Palace Guard's Diary

Great as if things weren't bad enough!! Now our best palace horse, Maximus, is missing!!!! What else can go wrong?!?!? I sure hope that we start getting some good luck soon!!!!!

A/N 111 reads!!! Who hoo!!! That's great!!! Awesome!!!!

I know, it's a short chapter. I just saw that this story was getting a lot of reads so I thought that I should update as soon as I could. Just please understand that it will probably take a while for me to update from now on, sorry, but school started, I know, I don't like it either!!:(:( ;);) and this story is getting plenty of reads yes, but I haven't seen any comments or votes for any of the chapters yet. (Except for Crazy_Booknerd and me.) So, I am not asking for much, all I am asking for is at least five different comments and ten votes for each chapter. I want to know what you think of my story and how I could improve it. I want your suggestions!! So, the deal is that I will not update the story until my little challenge is completed. And once it is, I will update the next chapter as soon as I can AND I will have a special contest. So, until then.

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