Hey, you guys. I just wanna notify all of you that the story will be getting a minor to major change from start to its most recent update. I want to improve everything and to be honest I rarely get my hands on this story because of my schedule and to top it all off, every time I have the time to write my brain completely shuts off and I don't know what to write with how the story is going.
I don't know what you say you to guys but I think I just dug myself grave with my recent updates. And I'm hard stuck with the recent one I've updated and I have no idea how to continue on with that and before, I have an idea to just time skip that day but it's kinda unfair for the rest if my characters. (They feel like that their just there if they are needed in one scene and that's all they are) Like Tina and Jenny, it's been a few chapters since they showed up and I think I'm prolonging each day too much. The ME, author today, thinks that each of the most recent updates feels like a one-shots. If you really read into it, it's an update to please you for the sake of just pleasing you. That's how one-shot is, and I don't like that at all.
So I decided to make a few adjustment from the first chapter up to the last one. I know, I meant it to be a slow burn but I'm really taking my time too much, it feels like the story isn't progressing at all to me.(Yup, I'm criticizing myself)
So now I wanna have your opinion guys. Should I......
1. Take this book down for an indefinite weeks and republished it after I'm done with revamping the storyline.
Or...
2. Should I just update the chapters one at a time from the first to the last chapter. I'm not taking it down but I could only update it if I'm able to.
Until I get a verdict, I'm focusing on my other time forgotten book, which I'm also planning to update. Update the entire thing.
I'm really serious about revamping this story, looking back at it makes me cringe a lot. All that wrong grammars and miss spelling. I just wanna fix it. I just wanna know what's the best approach I could take to do it.
P.S: I'm sorry for taking too long to address this but just wanna make things smoother in this story. I don't know what came into me when I made a giant love triangle with Sherwin. Originally it's just Jacob, who would be Jonathan's rival with Sherwin but I don't know I couldn't stop myself back then. Now, I wanna fix the mess the former me made.
I hope you understand guys.
Mystery Out~💙
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