(Random 125) Are you kidding me,

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So
I wrote an Evillious story

Then realized I had to change it a lot

Because the Black Box Sickle keeps Allen in...

Is opened with a key.

I forgot about that, so he shouldn't be able to dive in as a bat straight away.

Hnnng this sucks. I might have to change the rest too. It doesn't make much sense yet lol. You know what, here is a preview of a story I'd probably never publish lol.

Sickle had went back to the black box to check on Allen, only to be met with shouting. Loud screams of pain managed to escape the large, floating box, forcing a worried Sickle to fly faster than he already was, but it was too late.

The noise had stopped, and the Sun God had finally reached the opening. Swapping to his human form, he quickly unlocked the box and ran in, absolutely surprised by the sight. Allen was sitting with the chains on him, restricting most of his movement, as usual, but he was slouched down, a pained expression painted on his face, tears dripping down from his eyes to his chin. He mouthed words while trying to refrain from crying, but never made a noise during the time that the bat was around.

Once Sickle unsummoned the chains, the poor 14 year old boy's hands instantly dove for his neck before he held it as if he wasn't breathing during the whole ordeal. Then it dawned on him. Allen had lost one of his strongest qualities: his voice.

I also realized that only Irregular and the re_birthday Len have chains on them. Oops.

Unedited:
Sickle had went back to the black box to check on Allen, only to be met with shouting. Loud screams of pain managed to escape the large, floating box, forcing Sickle to fly faster but it was too late.

The noise had stopped, and the Sun God had finally reached the opening. He quickly flew in from the top, absolutely surprised by the sight. Allen was sitting with the chains on him, restricting most of his movement, as usual, but he was slouched down, a pained expression painted on his face while he cried. He mouthed words while trying to refrain from crying, but never made a noise during the time the bat was around.

Once Sickle unsummoned the chains, the poor 14 year old boy's hands instantly dove for his neck and he held it. Then it dawned on him. Allen had lost one of his strongest qualities: his voice.

This is a mess. This is also why you edit your work!

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