Nonsense Points

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#1. Quest
" 'It's just.. I'm scared for you, Y/N' He frowns and looks down. You place your hand on his hair and started brushing them slowly, 'Why would you be?' "
Where in tartarus did that come from?
Since when does Nico even act like that?
Link it people, If you claim to have it canon with the book, make it so that it has sense in it, not just random words compiled into one paragraph or sentence.

#2. Valentine's Day
" 'Why here, Nico?'You ask, looking at the freshly trimmed green grass, 'We're in the middle of a field, Nico! What were you thinking?' "
Again, where in tartarus did that come from?
Nico doesn't even answer your question.
The way Nico just suddenly becomes obsessed with you is so not Nico.
Make.Sense.
Read.The.Books.Thoroughly.

#3. Free
" 'Really Y/N? I don't want you to go yet.' You take his hand and intertwine it with your own, 'I'm sorry Nico, but the clock's ticking. We still haven't figured out the context of the recent prophecy, don't you remember?' You remind Nico.

He gets an idea as a smile starts forming on his face, 'Alright, Race you there, Y/N!' He runs out as you try to catch him, slow him down, anything to delay him. "
Okay, first of all, the chapter claims you're with Nico high up in a place that feels like paradise, making you FORGET about PROBLEMS.
Now take note, you claimed you didn't have problems or quests but later on, mentions a prophecy you say you don't understand and is on cue to have a discussion with somebody (probably Chiron) about that "prophecy" of yours.
It.Doesnt.Make.Any.Sense.
And the fact that Nico initiates a race is so not Nico, do you even know Nico?
Also, you can't chase Nico that far, he can shadow travel anytime on his will (pun intended).

#4. The Daughter of Aphrodite
" Nico just stares at you silently with a faint smile on his face. 'Earth to Nico? Hello?' You snap your fingers and it made a loud sound, enough for Nico to wake up to his senses. 'Sorry, I didn't notice what was going on. I was busy staring at your beautiful face.' He explains. 'Is that a thing Aphrodite daughters do? Or is it just you?' "
Awkward.
Nico be cheating on you, Aphrodite Child.
Nico would never be that naive to just start staring at your soul and get lost in your eyes, or something.
And what kind of Aphrodite kid is that, giving a 4/5, just cause her boyfriend stays in that exact cabin.
That's favouritism.

#5. Sunkissed (Solangelo Special)
The whole chapter doesn't make sense since Will isn't like that and the same goes with Nico. And Jason. I didn't put a certain part here because I can't put the whole chapter here haha. Otherwise, I love solangelo and the chapter was made purely with my solangelo fangirl scenarios.

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