UnOrdinary: Defective

Chapter 10

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Hello everyone, recently I got a comment.

This comment pointed out some mistakes, that I myself noticed, and some I did not. Thank you TheShadowVigil, for taking time out of your day, to help me become a better writer. What this means for the story is that I will write this weeks, then I will take a break, to go back and rewrite the other chapters. This chapter will be rewritten as well. The reason I am not just taking the time for this chapter, while I am writing it is, because there may be changes to the story, due to changes in the previous chapter, which would not make this line up with the rest of the story. Thank you for your patience.

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Arlo's POV

"How did you do that?" asked Arlo. Arlo looked intently at the girl, waiting for an answer. As he did time seemed to slow down, the girl a smirk on her face, and a glimmer in her eye. He glared, she tried his patience, did she know, who he was? She looked at him, with no fear in her eyes, no reaction to his glare, and most importantly still prideful, "Wouldn't you like to know?" she stated, then began to turn to leave. Arlo's patience was growing thinner by the second. He walked up to her, grabbing her arm and pushing it to the wall, "Yes, I would." As they shared a glare between each other, the train came to an abrupt stop. They were both sent flying, through the corridor connecting the rest of the train, to where the royals were. Arlo shifted his body, so he would land on the bottom, just in time. He landed on the bottom, and she was landed on his chest. Arlo hoisted her up, and put her down on the ground, then began to stand up, when he felt a tug on his arm. He looked at his arm, and traced the persons hand to their face, "Thank you," she stated. Arlo helped her up and they were on their way to the train conductor's area. Arlo passed Blyke and the others, still clinging to their seats

Blyke's POV

Arlo just looked at Blyke and Blyke knew what to do. He got out of his seat with great speed, not to offend the king. They strode through the corridors, catching glances from the crowd, also curious to what had happened. Two began to stand up when Blyke, glowed his eyes. Looking directly at them. They did not accept his challenge and took their seats. All three of them strode up to the final door way, where two guards stood strong guarding the section. Blyke saw the girl examine them, practically for just a second. "Halt!" one guard said, Arlo still glaring from the disturbances of his travel, "Let us through, something obviously happened due to the sudden stop, and all the mishaps are trying my patience," the guards looked at him and laughed, "You, you got point kid, but this is no thing for a child, why don't you go run along and go play on your E-Phone. Then we'll handle it." Elaine went up to Blyke, while the guards and Arlo were arguing. She whispered in his ear, "Hey, they're mid-tiers. When I drop to the ground to tie my shoes, go up to them and touch both guards on the shoulder." She dropped to the floor, turning away from the guards, to tie her shoes. Blyke went up to Arlo and the guards, "Hey, let's stop arguing, this is all a big misunderstanding." Blyke moved to the guards, "Why don't we-" they fell to the ground as Blyke touched them. "Whoa, how did I do that?" exclaimed Blyke, "Are they alright?" "Yes, they're just unconscious, now let's see what the holdup has been." Remarked the girl. They attempted to open the door, but did not open. Arlo looked at Blyke. Then Blyke's Energy Beams blasted through the door. As they entered the room, they noticed multiple things, when they went to the front. They saw the conductor, DEAD!