Hey! As some of you might have noticed already, I've edited the story. I've been working on it for a while now and I finally reuploaded each chapter. The main plot hasn't really changed much but some parts have been rewritten.
I've had this idea for the plot and how I'd like to finish the story (don't worry the story is far from over, I just prefer thinking ahead to prevent another writer's block from happening).
I noticed there would be a lot of unanswered questions and plot holes, so I thought it to be wise to simply edit those out before I continue.
I added a couple of chapters to the story so be aware that there might be a little shift. I would recommend rereading the story but if you decide it's not worth the hassle than don't worry, plot wise not much has changed.
If you did reread the story, please tell me if you find it an improvement? I'm curious to hear your opinions!
Feel free to give me feedback, know that I do read every comment and make use of the feedback I've been giving.
Speaking of which, I want to thank li_la_lo for correcting my questionable Italian. I've tried to change as much as possible, thank you for helping me out! Feel free to correct me if you feel it's needed.
I also want to thank ViolaArcticMonkeys, losingagameoflife and so many more for giving me the courage, inspiration and constructive feedback to continue this story!
Thank you all so much for reading!
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Mr. Ruthless
Romance"I'm a monster." "Just because that's what you believe, doesn't mean it's true." Eleanor whispered, her voice trembling along with the rest of her body. His eyes darkened as she took a step back. The contradiction proving the wrong in her words...
