I have put up three chapters to see what people think. I am looking to be critiqued and some suggestions. This is my first story ever published and written. Please review.
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The Odd Twin Out
FanfictionEveryone knows about poor Elena. A lot of people even know her sister Lora. Yet no one bothered to actually hear her side of the story. Lora Gilbert is the quiet twin. The one who is highly intelligent , gifted, and a powerful witch, but a wall flow...
