Got To Love Overbearing Big Bros

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AN: First of all, thanks to bartschkt for commenting on my story. You could all follow their example (Umbridge cough). And, this chapter is dedicated to all the bros in my life, little and big (for future reference, I have one little brother, and 7 older cousin brothers...), and to how annoying they can be, and how sweet they can be. VOTE, COMMENT, FOLLOW!!!!

I looked at the expression on Tobias's face, and I couldn't help it.

I burst out laughing...

"Not fair, Tris, now your brother is going to kill me...intelligently! He's a freaking Erudite!" Tobias pouted.

I told him it was revenge, and asked if the big bad Four was scared of a skinny Erudite, leading to another round of laughing that went on for at least 5 minutes. We couldn't help ourselves, we're Dauntless, after all.

The game progressed for another 20 minutes, the dares getting progressively weirder. Like seriously, who dares someone to wear clown makeup and hang upside down while simultaneously singing the alphabet? Uriah, apparently.

Since it was now maybe 2:00 in the night, and we have initiates coming tomorrow, we decided to call it a night and head back to our apartments. I had moved in with Tobias shortly after the end of initiation, and we shared a bed. I hadn't gotten over my fear of intimacy, but I didn't mind a make-out session at all. Lord, that boy could kiss.

We were doing said activity in our apartment before going to bed when the door was knocked off its hinges. Standing there was a very angry, disheveled, rage monster, also known as Caleb.

Wait, Caleb? What the hell?

"Where is that damn idiot that dumped you, Beatrice? Who is this? Why do you look like this? Why are you kissing him? What are you doing at 2 AM? What..." Caleb screams.

"Shut up! Let me answer these questions first! First, I'm not pregnant, and this is my boyfriend. He did not dump me, and we are kissing at 2 AM because we want to. I look like this because I am Dauntless, and this is Four, Dauntless prodigy and the love of my life. That was all of them, right?" I count them off on my fingers.

"What?" Caleb asks, totally confused.

"You are Erudite, right? She shouldn't have to repeat any of that, and the answers are pretty obvious. So, you can go home and fulfill your brotherly duties another day." Tobias snarks. He's obviously upset at being interrupted. Teenagers.

"Play nice, Four, this is my brother, so no yelling."

Caleb walks out stunned, with a promise to visit soon, to discuss this.

I can't help it. I have to burst out laughing, and shortly, after a couple glares, so does Tobias. We curl up to sleep, after setting the alarm for 8:00 for when the initiates arrive.

This should be fun.

AN: So as you can see, I am taking a more story-like direction, and I would like suggestions for names. If you would like to add yourself as a character, drop me a comment with your name, physical description (hair color, skin color, height, build, etc.) and your faction of choice. If I don't get more than 10 over the week, I will make my own. By the way, bartschkt, you will get a character for sure. Maybe if others reviewed I would do the same for them...(hint)

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By the way, if you didn't get the Umbridge cough reference, read the Harry Potter books after crawling out from under the rock you've been in. (I'm a total Potterhead)

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