The unexpected 'visitor'

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Place- Palutena's Temple

Time- 11:23pm

Characters- 1) Pit 2) Me (Palutena) 3) Rhythm X

Rhythm X belongs to SamDrake-IceKnight.

Small background knowledge about Rhythm X:

Incredible dancer. Wants to defeat a government that is trying to ban music, dance and the such. Very positive about things and enjoys tricking Pit. :) Hope this is enough information to get your minds thinking! //smiles

(Yes. I will sometimes accept OCs. :) )

If you see '***' there will also be another one. One will start a private talk to the reader, the second one will end it. These usually come in a pack of two. If you see another '***' it's the start of another private chat to the reader.

Example.

( This will be part of the story line. )

*** = The start of one private chat to reader.

Pit: Blah Blah Blah

Palutena: Blah Blah Blah

*** =The end of one private chat to reader.

( Then, there may be more story timing. )

*** =Second time of private chat to reader.

Palutena: Blah Blah Blah

Pit: Blah Blah Blah

*** =End of second private chat.

This will be confusing for a few of you readers so please don't be afraid to ask me to clear it out. I'm sure it'll make much more sense if you keep reading.

-The story begins now-

The night was quiet.

No voices could be heard.

Everyone was asleep.

...

Or were they?

***

Pit: Guys! The answer is no!

Palutena: Pit.. Really?

Pit: You asked!

Palutena: Not to you though!

Pit: Oh...

Palutena: It's alright. Moving on!

Pit: Right!

***

Anyway, back to the story. Nothing could be heard. That was until a loud crash disturbed the peace.

***

Pit: ( I told you guys )

***

All the lights within the temple lit up. All the centurions ran out of the temple, heavily armed and ready to battle.

"W-What was that?!" Palutena ran out a few seconds after Pit and the centurions were out.

"We don't know Lady Palutena!" Pit panicked, searching around himself, through bushes. Even under rocks.

"P-Pit... I'm not so sure a person or item that made that loud noise could fit under a rock..." Palutena scratched her head.

"Well, we have to be sure Lady Palutena! It could be one of Viridi's miniature Cragalanche styled forces!" Pit explained to her.

"Fine fine. Go ahead. I'll look inside the home to find any other live creature hiding around the temple itself!" Palutena walked back into the temple, "Maybe I'll just continue to sleep, Pit and the centurions will do great without me," She yawned and teleported back to her room.

"Troops! We're spreading all around this temple! High and low! Far and wi-"

"Wide?" A voice had interrupted Pit, making him turn around.

"W-Who's there?!" Pit asked, looking around but seeing nothing.

"I can't believe you don't remember me," the voice was getting louder. Pit drew out his bow, getting ready to hit the next sudden sound that he heard. Not literally though.

"Well, I can't remember you until I can see you," Pit tried to have a small conversation to the 'voice'.

"Hm, my name is Nori Than, but you might remember me as... 'Rhythm X'

"Nori Than.." Pit looked down, thinking.

"You're getting there," the voice told him, slowly reaching out from the darkness.

"Rhythm X..." Pit repeated himself, beginning to remember something.

"You're super close now Pit!" Her feet were now in the sight of light.

"Wait now, what?" Pit sighed, scratching his head, "Sorry, I have too many friends to remember every single one of them,"

The girl facepalmed, "Thanks Pit," she let out a playful sigh as she stepped into the light, revealing a girl at her mid teens. "Now do you remember?" She smiled at him.

"R-Rhythm?!" Pit shouted, his voice echoing through the outer temple walls.

"Shh!" Rhythm pulled Pit into the bushes as a bunch of centurions ran through their direction.

Luckily for Rhythm's flexibility, they were able to hide in a bushier place than the other bushes, covered with a lot of broken tree branches.

***

Pit: Bushier place than the other... Bushes..?

Palutena: It's a pretty good line if I do say so myself!

Pit: Uh, couldn't you have gone with a big garden hedge..?

Palutena: No Pit. A bush seems more... Hm.. what's the word.. legitimate!

Pit: I still think a hedge would fit the situation a lot more, Lady Palutena.

Palutena: Oh Pit, the goddess knows what she's doing~

***

"What are you doing here?!" Pit whisper shouted at her.

"Aw, com'n! You could have at least greeted me a warm welcome!" she told him, giving him a little scrub on the head.

"Sorry," Pit apologized.

"It's alright!" She smiled warmly.

"A-Anyway, I thought you were out adventuring, you know, defeating the... Whatever you call them?" Pit looked at her.

"Pit! It's a government! Trying to stop something that means the world to me and so many others!" Rhythm explained to him.

"S-Sorry! I forgot! You know me..!" Pit nervously laughed.

Rhythm tried keeping a straight face but a small smile rose to her face. "Anyway, Pit, I need your help! Come! Follow me," she stood up and ran off ahead.

"Wait! I have to tell Lady Palutena!" Pit tried shouting to her, but she didn't seem to stop.

"Oh jeez! I don't even know what this is for!" Pit stood up and began to run after her, "R-Rhythm! Wait up!"

He was approaching a cliff, but because of the darkness of the night, he couldn't see it.

Rhythm X raised a silent fist as she hid behind a few trees, "Sorry Pit! But you know how much I enjoy tricking you~" she smiled innocently as she watched Pit fall, yell and get extracted by Palutena herself.

-End-

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