That Bisexual Baby ( Family Guy Fan-fiction)

Episode |~|2: The critic

Episode summary : Brian gets an invite to California to have one of his books analysed by one of the toughest critics in story telling.

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" what are you doing ? " stewy asked.

" writing a novel.  It's a masterpiece,  so I need maximum concentration. " Brian said.

" what's it called ? " stewy tried to peak at Brian's lap top.

" it's not ready yet !  Haven't come up with a name. " Brian yelled.

" well you better hurry it up ! You just got invited to California for a preview of one of your books after the last hit,  what's it called ? "

" really ?  We're going to California !? " Brian asked with excitement.

" you say it like its an all expenses paid trip. " stewy said dryly. " Luckily !.... I still have my telleportation device ! "

"OK OK,  I'll try and make this the best book I've ever written. "Brian said.

" at least tell me what it's about. "

" uh , it's about uh  a man !  "

" uhu. " stewy said.

" a man who... Who went to space through a worm hole in his back yard. "Brian said.

" that sounds ridiculous. "stewy said. " you should write something more based on reality.... Like a man trying to get a job in the big city.  These are top critics we're dealing with here. "

" thanks,  stewy.  I'll take your advice. "Brian said. " and stop reading my messages ! "

" oh that reminds me,  I got a message from Ida. "stewy smirks.

Brian rolls his eyes.

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" hey,  Brian. " stewy came to the living room. " Brian ? " he saw Brian's lap top and decides to take a sneak peek at his work.

" the hell ! " Brian yelled. Stewy bursts into laughter.

" you haven't even written anything ! " stewy laughed.

"it takes time,  alright ? And I have writers block ! " Brian defends .

" sure sure sure. " stewy tries to catch his breath. " when will the writers block go away ?  Because we're leaving for California tomorrow or - telleporting. "

" alright. " Brian said. He spent all day working on it,  depriving himself from sleep.

The next day,  stewy got dressed,  but Brian was still asleep. " wake up,  dog. " stewy yelled.

" huh ? " Brian rolls awake. " must have overslept ! "

" you sure did,  Bry ."stewy laughed. " let's see what you've written so far. "

Stewy went through the work applauded Brian. "wow,  you've really out done yourself,  Bry. This is awesome! "

"really?  "Brian asked.

" alright,  go put something on. The critics wouldn't like a naked dog. "stewy said.

"and they wouldn't like a talking baby either. " stewy laughed.

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"my gosh,  what kind of cologne did you wear? "stewy asked.

"it's a cologne that attracts good luck.  I got it from a fortune teller down town quahog. I'll really need it if I'm gonna be criticized by the critics. " Brian said.