Need Help With The Title

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Hey guys!!
Its r1thawani again!!
Today I have decided to write my first poem so are you all ready??
Hope you are!!
Well I need help with my first poem's title so any suggestions are most welcomed!!
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POEM#1

I really don't know how I'm feeling
I feel my guards peeling
The heart I sealed bleeding
Nothing at all that I'm needing
It's like all my fears are on my face and people are reading
The feeling i have been dreading

I'm scared
I wept and my heart bled
I screamed and stones heard
They changed their direction saying they feared
I cried and cried for I was scared and the stones.... they feared...

I'm terrible, by the doors, I was told
By mom and friends taught to be bold
In trying to be bold I became cold
My heart once swept like a princess felt sold
My body felt nothing but a over used piece of mould
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Hey!! This poem is not done yet its to be continued but I just wanted to give an analyzing break...
But anyways this is a story of a girl who has her heart broken.
She tries to tell the world but the world is not listening to her. They are stones...
Her friends tell her to be bold and that it is OK but she is so becoming protective of herself that she becomes cold!
Ok bye till next time!! Lots of love
r1thawani



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