Renesmee's story

Chapter 11 unconscious

Renesmee's POV:

I feel terrible. I didn't think that I was going to throw up and pass out. All I remember before I passed out was Aunt Alice helping me. I don't know where I am, and I can't open my eyes. I can still breathe and turn in my sleep. I think I'm in my bed. It feels like it, so I must be.

I don't want to be sleeping. I can only think about what happened today after I finished talking to my Dad.

I hung up the phone and went to my room. It was quiet, the way I wanted it to be. I got into my pyjamas and crawled into my bed.

I waited in my bed and tried to fall asleep. After a couple of minutes, I couldn't sleep, so I got up and went to the bathroom. I forgot to wash the makeup that Aunt Alice put on me off. When I was finished washing my face, I went to the living room to see if my parents were home yet. When I got into the living room, I heard a crash coming from my room. 'That's weird,' I thought, so I grabbed my cell and I went up into my room to see what it was.

I made it to my room and I saw that my window was shattered. Mom and Dad are NOT going to be happy about this. I hope they believe me when I say that I didn't do it. Then I saw something move.

"Whose there?" I asked. I knowing that I'm not going to get an answer but it was worth trying. I didn't get an answer.

I looked all over my room to find the thing. I wasn't scared yet, so I didn't hesitate on trying to find it.

All of a sudden, the thing grabbed me and the rest of the trip to where we were going was a blur.

When we got to this cold, dark, wet and creep place, I was alone. I couldn't feel a presence near me. I was starting to panic when I remembered that I had my cell with me. I hope it has service because if it didn't, I'm stuck in here. I tried calling Mom.

The phone rang a couple times and then I heard someone pick up.

"Hello?" someone answered.

"Mom?" I quietly answered back.

"Nessie, is that you?" She sounded like I scared the life out of her. I bet that she put the phone on speaker so that Dad could hear too.

"Yes"

"Where are you?"

"I don't know! I went to my room and then I heard the window smash. The next thing I know I'm in a dark, wet, cold place," I started to cry. I want to be back home with Mom and Dad. I want to be in my bed sleeping because I'm still not feeling well. I want to be anywhere but here.

"Nessie, is anyone with you?" Dad asked.

"No."

"Are you hurt?"

"No, I'm just really scared Daddy," I said with a little bit of a sob.

"We're going to find you, OK Nessie?" Mom said to try and clam me. I can tell that she was panicing because her voice was still panicky.

"OK Mom."

"Nessie, can you tell us what the place you're in looks like?" Daddy asked.

"It's really spaced out and dark. It's creepy, wet and cold."

"Do you think that it's anywhere near Forks?"

"I think. Wait, I see someone coming in…" I trailed off.

There was someone in here. I can see a tiny figure in the shadows of the dark place I'm in. Mom and Dad were silent.

"Nessie? Are you in here?" said the voice.

"Who is it?" I asked in a really scared voice.

"It's me."

"Aunt Alice?" I asked again.

Aunt Alice? What was she doing here? I think she saw me and came after me.

"Yes Nessie, it's me. Are you OK?"

"Yeah. I'm just talking to Mom and Dad on the phone."

"OK, Nessie, lets get out if here."

"OK. Mom, Dad, I'm going to go with Aunt Alice. I'll see you at home."

"OK Nessie. Bye," Mom and Dad said in unison.

I got on Aunt Alice's back and she started to move. When she started moving, I drifted off to sleep.

When I awoke, we were in front of the cottage. I hopped off Aunt Alice's back and just before we went in she told me that my mother was going to come straight for me. I opened the door and like Aunt Alice said, Mom came for me and hugged me.

"Nessie! Oh my gosh! You scared the life out of me!" she exclaimed while hugging me. I hugged her back even though she was twice as cold as before. We hugged a little longer and then we let go. She went to see Aunt Alice and I went to see Daddy.

When I got to Daddy, I hugged him and we sat on the couch. Daddy put me on his lap and I started talking to him. He hugged me while I was talking and then I stopped. I was about to fall asleep and I couldn't talk anymore.

I started to feel sick and jumped of Dad's lap and ran to the bathroom. Went I got there, Aunt Alice was there and she pushed me toward the toilet. I started puking and I felt someone rubbing my back and holding my hair. I was finished throwing up and I was just about to pass out when Daddy picked me up and brought me to my room. I heard someone put something on my night side table and something on the ground. What was happening to me? I had never been sick and now I was getting sick. I want to know what the hell is going on!

Daddy put me in my bed and I was in a light sleep. I could still hear everything and can hear what was being said if anyone was talking. I know that people are still in my room, I can feel it.

I was still lying there and no one was talking. I want someone to talk! I tried to open my eyes but someone was by me.

"Nessie, keep your eyes closed and try to go to sleep. You really need it. When you're ready to wake up, we'll bring you to see Grandpa," Dad said.

Grandpa was going to check on me and make sure that I was OK? He didn't know much about half human- half vampires. I let Grandpa check me often to make sure that I was OK and that I was feeling normal. If he found something wrong, he would call someone that he knew, I don't remember who it is exactly, I know I've met him once but that's just it. All I knew was that I was checked often. Maybe this is normal, and getting sick is a part of my life. If it isn't, then I hope we can find answers and fast.