Book : Fishnet Love by bangtanination
Reviewed by: MounaRao
Grammatical Construction : 9
Your general framework of words was very good. But as the story prolonged you shifted from paragraphs to texting. It's always better to stick with a single form of writing.
Grammatical Errors : 10
I found none that I could point out :)
Easily Understood : 7
It was easy at the start but as the story prolonged, there are many places where I've got confused. Probably it has got something to do with the fact that it's a fanfiction which I've no idea about. Also, there were a lot of characters which got introduced at the same time confusing me all the more. ( I'm not familiar with the characters or bts, so I can't really judge about it. No offence meant )
Use of Vocabulary : 10
Your words are simple and elegant.
Use of Punctuation marks : 10
You were perfect in this department.
Portrait of the story in the title of the book : 9
I love your title name 'Fishnet Love'. It's nice and unique. I couldn't really relate it to your plot or storyline but still, I loved it.
Lessons gained : 10
Character sketch : 9
My only suggestion is take your sweet time while introducing your characters instead of doing all at once. It makes the reading experience more pleasant.
Good luck for your book!
Score: 74/80
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