As Brooklyn opens the door to the back garden she helps mal out as soon as there out everyone scream SUPRISE mal jumps but Brooklyn was there to calm her down mal looks at Brooklyn with tears in her eyes Brooklyn pulls mal into her arms and hold her they then make there way though people as Brooklyn leads mal to her seat once there Brooklyn goes to get mal a drink whiles waiting ash and Ali are there.
Ali hey brook you really did a great job with mals birthday I can tell she is having the time of her life you sure know how to treat a lady maybe give ash some tips for me.
Ash hey you I treat you right princess
Brooklyn just laughs and tells Ali that she never gives away her tricks they all laugh as the calm down Brooklyn grabs hers and mals drink and make her way back over to mal to see her crowded by some of the team and her close friends there all looking at the ring on mals finger.
Alex it's beautiful and you said it's a promise ring right
Mal yea why
Alex because that look a hell of a lot of cash for a promise ring.
Mal I don't even know what it cost she got me loads of stuff though out the day it was amazing going on a hunt for my team mates she has made this the best birthday ever.
Brooklyn that good to hear princess that all I want for you here your drink baby.
Mal thank you baby do you want to sit here and I will sit in your lap there no more seat Tobin pinches yours when Kelly noticed my promise ring
Brooklyn yea baby and that's fine I would rather you in my arms anyways I enjoy holding you.
Kelly whipped and how much was that ring anyways
That got Kelly a slap on the head from hope.
Hope Kelly you don't ask that.
Kelly what come on I bet am not the only one who wants to know.
Brooklyn one I am not whipped as always and two you really want to know what it cost.
Mal one second baby can you stand for me.
Brooklyn sure princess.
Brooklyn stands and mal know exactly witch pocket Brooklyn's wallets in she grabs it and has Brooklyn sit back down she sit back in her lap and opens Brooklyn wallet she go and find the receipt for the ring her jaw drops and she whips her head round to Brooklyn.
Mal bbbrrook iisss thisss right
Kelly wow by the looks of it and the way mal is speaking that cost a bomb
Brooklyn it's nothing as long as my princess is happy price doesn't come in to anything if she needs or wants anything she know it's hers.
Mal good because am taking ur black card and going shopping with some of the girls tomorrow whiles you have meeting.
Brooklyn well you beat me to it I was going to ask you that in morning when we head back for the hotel.
Mal ok good well that sorted let's have some fun.
Brooklyn wait I need you to put this on first then we can get started.
Mal turns so Brooklyn can put the blind gold on mal once it's on there Brooklyn lets mal know she is going to stand and have Alex keep a hold of her for a second.
Once mal is with Alex Brooklyn runs off to the side and pulls the sheet off mals car some of the girls gasp at the look of it brook runs back over to mal and helps her walk till she's infront of her new car once there Brooklyn tells mal to close her eye once that's done she take the bind fold off of mal and steps back once she's ways from swinging arms she tells mal to open her eyes mal opens them her jaw drops again for what felt like a thousand time today she spins around so fast and throws her self into Brooklyn's arms repeating thank you over and over whose crying once mal calm down Brooklyn takes her over and shows her all the car she has it custom for mal it has mals name and number plus a crown sticker into the seats she shows mal all the cool stuff and let mal know that they will be taking her new car with them to the hotel.
Once there all back around again from looking at mals car the night goes on everyone has a great time mal got so spoil that her parents have to take most of her gift with them to drop of at her apartment as they won't all fit in mal new car and as her and Brooklyn are driving back to mals in a few days they had no problem helping the teens out the night is almost over Brooklyn and mal go over to mals mum and dad plus to Brooklyn's mum and Carli even tho Brooklyn hasent said it she thinks of Carli as a second mum now once they get to them they say hi.
Mal we just come to let you know that we are off to the hotel now and I really wanted to thank you Ali for all of this and for helping Brooklyn out I had an amazing time so thank you.
Ali that's no problem sweetie i see you as family now and we take care of family.
They all hugged and said there goodbyes once that was done they made there way to mals car Brooklyn was going to be driving as mal had a couple of drinks for her birthday she wasent drunk or anything they just wanted to be safe once in the car they set off to the hotel once there Brooklyn got the room key and they headed up into the penthouse for the night just as the got into the room Brooklyn turns around to have mals lips on hers in a second they started kissing mal deeping the kiss Brooklyn pulls mal closer and puts her hand under mal bum she lifts mal up and mal wraps her legs around her brooklyn walks them to the bedroom once there she place mal in the bed and bends down pull off mals heels once there off she runs her finger up mals legs mal watches with dark eyes as Brooklyn brings her hand up to mals face mal pull Brooklyn back into a kiss as she does this she leans back pulling Brooklyn with her the kiss deepens Brooklyn pulls away.
Brooklyn are you sure baby I really want to make sure you really are ready before we continue
Mal am so sure baby your all I want are you sure and ready two.
Brooklyn I am my princess.
With that said mal pulls Brooklyn back into a kiss as she was kissing her she started undoing Brooklyn's shirt buttons once there all open she take Brooklyn shirt off and chucks it across the room as she was doing that Brooklyn was kissing down mals neck leave a hickey or two along the way mal pulls her back up and kisses her as she does that her nails are running up and down Brooklyn's abs brooklyn helps mal out of her dress and once it gone Brooklyn's eye and nearly black with lust mal notice and smirks she know with that look she going to have the night of her life Brooklyn starts leavening feather kisses all over mals body mal feels like she on fire all she really want now it's to feel Brooklyn inside her as thing build up mal take of Brooklyn boxers and once she does Brooklyn springs to life with all 10in mal eye go wide of a second then she licks her lips she grabs Brooklyn's wallet and get the condom out of it she help Brooklyn put it on once it's on mal pulls brioklyn into a kiss as they was kissing Brooklyn slowly make sure to try and not hurt mal to much they both know that it's was going to hurt her at first once Brooklyn was just about half way she stopped to make sure mal wasent hurting to much.
Brooklyn are you ok baby.
Mal yea baby your doing good just take it slow like you being doing please.
Brooklyn that's fine baby I can do that just please tell me if am hurting you
Mal I will baby now please keep going.
So with that Brooklyn kept going she pushes more into mal until she's all the way in she waits for mal to get use to her size once she get a nod from mal she starts moving in and out of mal at a steady pace she keeps going never taking her eye away from mals as she keep up the pace mal tells her to go faster and harder so Brooklyn dose as she is told there both moaning and enjoying the feeling of being in and a round each other so intimate as they go closer to their climax mal teeth sink into Brooklyn's neck she starts sucking on it as she come all around Brooklyn cock just as Brooklyn come at same time filling up the condom once they come down from there high Brooklyn takes off the condom and puts it in the bin mal grabs her purse and pulls out a box of condoms and hand them to Brooklyn she tell Brooklyn she want her to make love to her all night long and that is just what they both did they final feel asleep with each of them feeling complete mal in Brooklyn's arms as always.
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Fanfiction17 years only and the best of the best she can do anything with a ball at her feet so when she get the call she over the moon what h as she chases her rearm and falls in love on the way