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Scores:
Cover: 5/5
A very sparkly cover
Title: 5/5
The title sounds really cool.
Summary/Blurb: 7/10
I found the blurb to be very interesting, but it had a few grammatical/punctuational errors.
Plot Development: 12/15
Grammar/Punctuation: 6/10
I saw multiple grammatical/punctuational errors and some spelling issues. A major issue I saw was missing/misplaced punctuation, mostly with your dialogue. Some of your sentences didn't flow or make sense sometimes. I think it might be helpful to read your chapters out loud before uploading. That helps me a lot
Vocabulary: 7/10
Character Development: 10/10
Originality: 6/10
I've seen stories like this before, but I think your characters help make the story original.
Overall enjoyment: 7/10
Final Thoughts: 10/15
I liked your story. I think the concept was great, and I really enjoyed your characters. I think a major issue for me was the grammar/punctuational issues. It kept bringing me out of the story. If you fix those errors, your story would be even more amazing! :)
