Your Shout

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As I said, this chapter is exclusively dedicated to you guys who have read this story so far.

Share your thoughts and predictions as to what might have happened here.

So, if you are interested I want to give out this challenge or homework to you. Can you please go back in the story and read the parts again which had the real Victor and the fake Victor in it?

*Added later*
On readers request,

I have italicized every scene of real Victor from chapter 20 onwards.
Please remove this book from your library/reading list and add it again if you don't see italicized parts

And this is the most important thing... can you tell me, if I have done justice to the narrative while maintaining this plot secret well hidden?

Also give me suggestions as who you want the cast for this story to be. We have two Victors ( or whatever) hahaha

Also do you want any cast at all?

If you remember the original cover of the story it shows a shadowy figure, a faceless man but two guns.. that's what the cover was supposed to depict .

The one person who appears to be the hero and then this impostor..

@MB_247 you are free to do the trailer for this book now.. thank you.

Also I need your feedback on whether or not I should split this book into two.

I was of the idea that I should end this book here and start the next book

with a title ... something like "Spies n Spice - the untold story"

But it would require a lot of referencing back to the previous chapters..

So what do you guys suggest?

I am all ears and haven't fixed on anything.

Please please share your thoughts.

The link to the sequel or Book 2 of this story is below.
Spies n Spice - a Web of Lies

https://my.w.tt/5jan3S2IH1

Sesi

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