Critical Naina 🤒

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the boy and girl were still fighting and naina was becoming more restive...their voice were like someone is stabbing her heart...when suddenly the boy walked back leaving her alone in deserted place...where no is there to even listen her voice...the girl collapsed down on the ground and start crying...naina rohan vishakha vivek all got confuse...because sometime before she was acting like she don't need that boy anymore...but now she is crying...??

vishakha asked - beta tujhe yeh drama kyu dekhna hai chal na

sameer glared her in anger and replied - ek akeli ladki ko kaise chod ke jaa sakte hain hum...aap thode time aur rukiye

everyone gave a - ziddi ladka look to him when suddenly another boy come and walk to her by having a nervous smile...he was also very young just like them both...he bend down and touch her shoulder making her startled...radikha instantly wiped away her tears...and looked at him asking in shock - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho neeraj...??

neeraj plainly answer while clasping her hand - mein jaise bhi aaya hoon...maine dekha wo ladka tumhare saath bahut badtameezi kar raha tha...chehra muje dikha nahi...par itna zarur pata chal raha tha ki woh tumhe zabardasti apne sath rehne keh raha tha...tumne use thappad kyu nahin maara radhika...??

radhika laughed painfully and staring neeraj she said in arduous - thappad aur mein use maaru...kabhi nahi...galti meri hai to saza bhi to muje hi milni chahiye na...!!!

neeraj didn't understood what she is saying...while rohan enlarged his eye and stared at sameer...who was smirking looking at him...is this is his plan...?? but how he knew...?

where as the neeraj was consoling radhika and after a good time...he fetch in deep breath and then slightly touching her cheek he uttered softly - i love you radhika

radhika gave a shocking look to him and standing up in urgency she asked in daze - ye tum kya keh rahe ho neeraj...??

neeraj too got up and holding her shoulder he said like a mad - yes radhika i love you...tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho...i know bas batana nahi chahti par koi baat nahi ab to bata do...mere kaan taras gaye hain yeh sunne ke liye...please say...radhika...please

radhika couldn't take it anymore she slapped his cheek and uttered angrily - what are you saying neeraj mein tumse koi pyaar nahi karti aur na karugi...tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki main tumse pyar karugi...!!!

by looking this all naina bp got so high...her heart was popping badly...she have start seeing everything blurr...their voice were echoing in her ear...the scene that was happening in front of her eye were perfectly fitting into the blur images her mind was forming...her mind was ready to blast...while rohan too got stunned seeing this all...he remembered that the same scene...same place...at same time had happened with him too...it was like god is playing with him today...he was so confuse that what exactly is happening with him...??

while sameer peeked at naina with a misty eye...just then his eye got wide open as she start breathing heavily...he rushed to her and patting her cheek he asked shockingly - naina...naina kya hua tttt...tum thik hona...?

naina nodded in no and replied with so much difficulty - nahi sameer...mmm...mmujhe...kkk...kkuch yyyy...yaad aa raha hai...yyy...yeh sab...mmm...mere...ssss...saath

sameer eagerly asked - haan bolo naina kya hua tha...??

before she could answer him...she closed her eye and almost stop breathing...everyone become feverish they started shaking her body and asking that what happen to her...but naina was not responding to anyone...her body stop reacting...without wasting a sec...sameer carried her in his arm and making her sleep inside his car he start driving to hospital...telling vishakha to come with him...and rohan vivek from any auto or by cab...with each passing sec he was becoming more unrestrained...if anything would happen his naina then he will kill himself...his eye have become numb seeing naina in this condition...while vishakha was continuously rubbing her palm and caressing her hair...!!!

in sometime they reached an nearby hospital and immediately lifting her up in his arm...he moved inside by roaring - doctor...doctor please meri naina ko bacha lo...please 😭

two nurse came approaching him...and asked - kya hua...??

sameer tearfully said while looking at naina - meri wife achanak se behosh hogayi hai...uski saansein bhi nahi chal rahi hain...please jaldi se aap doctor ko bulaiye na...!!!

the two nurse nodded in yes and walking inside the doctor cabin...they informed him about what sameer told to them...the doctor instantly came out by rushing to him and asking - sameer kya hua hai naina ko...?

sameer narrated everything and then said in a requesting tone - aapke mana karne ke bawjud bhi maine yeh risk liya par please aap meri naina ko thik kar dijiye ga...!!

doctor kept his hand on sameer shoulder by blinking his eye in assurance that nothing could happen to naina...and then checking her nerves...he said in chocked voice - sameer naina ki halat bahut kharab hai humein ise jald se jald icu me shift karna padega...!!!

sameer cried such like a broken child and kissing her forehead...he said in helpless - aapko jo karna hai woh kariye bas meri naina thik ho jaani chahiye

doctor instructed nurse to take naina on a stretcher inside the icu...and following his order...they made naina sleep on stretcher and took her in icu...and close the door...while sameer rested his head on the wall by crying and muttering - muje chod ke mat jaana naina...please...tum nahi harogi...you have to be strong 😢

while rohan vivek too come in hurriedness and looking at the icu theater room...they asked in jostle - naina kaha hain...??

sameer pointed his finger on the icu room by saying in heavy tone - naina is in danger...doctor ne 48 ghanto ka time diya hain

and hearing such a shocking news everyone stumble...and closed their eye praying for naina safety...while sameer eye were stuck on Icu room...this all had happened only because of him...if he had not done any kind of drama in front of naina...then the situation would be better than this he curse himself for being so careless...irresponsible...nonchanlate...immodest....!!!! 😞

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