Jack and Jill went up a hill
To fetch a pail of water
The thing from hell emerged from the well
And started chasing them
Jack had fell and the thing from hell
Had caught up to him
Jill went back and saw Jack slack
Against a broken log
Jack had died and Jill had cried
So she sought out revenge
The thing from hell couldn't tell
What Jill was going to do
Jill had feast on the beast
And collected all it's blood
Jill took her cloak to let it soak
In the blood of the dead
She hid her pain and went insane
Now she visits her grandmother
The thing from hell hadn't fell
Back to the pit
Jill had found on the ground
The tracks of the beast
It followed her and ate her grandmother
Then got away
Jill had fell down to hell
Where insanity consumes
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Well. It's not my best work so I'm not very fond of it. Feel free to comment what you think and if I made errors, please notify me. Also feel free to tell me what I should add or change to improve it. Currently I can't think of any ideas for the next story. Maybe I could make this into a story..? I'd welcome ideas. Thanks for reading!
