Should I rewrite this?
My writing has improved a lot, and this saga this is going to be around four books long(not including one-shots and maybe a backstory book for a character none of y'all know about yet) so I want it to be good!
Let me know your thoughts on the comments, and holy shite, my leg won't stop moving! I had a small sip of Monster, and now I can't think very straight.
Bye,
Rachel out
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Tortured [under temporary construction]
FanficBook 1 in the Tortured Saga A golden lombax with reddish brown stripes snuck through the Nefarious Space Station, hoping to rescue his Markazian friend, but ended up getting captured. While in captivity, the lombax becomes friends with his neighbori...
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