lol the stuff i did

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so he just deleted all my comments so i think that is humerous. I will now say all the nitpicky things i said here. So first of all he kept using bold and quotes that were stupid and unecesary. despite his futile comedic efforts, the story did make me laugh at one word. he used the word alliances. friking alliances. i dont know what the in the H E double hockey stick he was reffering to. basically he made some false statements so i fixed those for him. He does have a friend who is kinda ok but i still dunno bout him. 


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