I bet your wondering why I haven't updated in a while. I actually have a few reasons for this, and not just for boredom.
- This story isn't even about cloudtail and brightheart... just their kits. (And this is the reason why the description is inaccurate to me.)
- There's rarely ANY emotions and really nothing exciting,Also the prophecy was TOTALLY random and had nothing to do in the story... also no cat (or person) solves prophecies that quickly.
- I feel like nobody really enjoys it... I understand that this is my first story but still, nobody really gives me comments (last time I checked) which is fine but still is kinda surprising. (Not really since nobody really wants to or just wants to read.)
- this story goes by too fast, and nothing really interesting happens.
However, I won't quit this book. I'll rewrite this, but in the meantime I'll create new chapters so people who liked it won't be sad. (I've experienced this 3 times, and it isn't fun.) I wanted to update you guys... even if nobody reads these.
EDIT: yes I know this is on hold (for now) and I know that I said I'd create new chapters. BUT this is on hold FOR NOW so, I'm not quitting this but because 1. This is my first book and 2. I really believe that this could turn in a different direction. But it won't be on hold for long. I've decided on making a new book (and making new chapters for Tigerstar's love.) So in the meantime you can read those or just read something actually good (or just not read at all) so because I don't wanna waste your time, bye!
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Cloudtail's Promise (ON HOLD!)
FanfictionCloudtail's mate, Brightheart has competion. Daisy. Daisy's jealous of her having kits with Cloudtail so she fakes having kits with him. will it work? or will daisy be crushed? find out in this story!
