Cloudtail's Promise (ON HOLD!)

Sorry for not updating sooner

I haven't updated in what feels like a year, and I said that I'd update soon. I makes me feel like I lied... I'm sorry for this. I should've updated. Now, I'm going to start new points and explain further on points I already gave (I'm going to TRY to explain further so srry if I really don't.) And now I'll begin. So, I'm losing interest in writing. And in my opinion, I made bad quality fanfics. That and... the story moves too fast. I don't know how to explain this but I've only published 15 (counting this one) pages and they're ALREADY at the gorge. That's TOO fast. Also, Honeytail figured the prophecy in a DAY or two. That's the best I can explain it. (She had NO trouble finding the point of the prophecy, and the prophecy ITSELF doesn't make sense! It's a copy of Firestar's Quest!) The timeline is supposed to be modern meaning that Bramblestar's leader right now. This is a common misconception with fanfic writers. (In the Warriors community of course) Now, I understand if you're doing this for a flashback or maybe a build up (or just bringing a cat back from the dead. BUT even then, you still HAVE to keep other cats in mind. Or if that's just the timeline of your fanfic that's fine.) But other then that, you should research before writing. It's okay to be confused and it's not a need to research, it's just best if you do. I'm moving on with another point in mind. Now, this is just a nitpick and could offend Cloudtail X Daisy haters. Daisy's personality in this fanfic is more... rude if anything. And I gotta admit, daisy's not rude. She would NEVER try to harm cloudtail's relantionships. She's nicer then most people actually think she is. In fact, she went to the forest in the first place to protect her kits. I understand that some person reading this is gonna think "That doesn't make her nice. Females naturally do that to keep her kits out of harm's way. Why is this a point?" And I totally agree with that. However, keep in mind that cats in this series act like humans. Yes while a human WOULD do that someone like that in that universe is considered "nice." Why did she leave the forest instead of staying at the barn, well, turns out that "harm" actually was that Daisy was scared of her kits getting taken away by the Nofurs (Twolegs) so she ran away. Now let's start another point. Brightheart ACTUALLY had kits in the series. Don't believe me? Search up "what are brightheart's kits?" And there will be... Whitekit, Amberkit, Dewkit, and Snowkit. However, Whitekit was Brightheart's first litter. Yep, you read it right! Whitekit was born alone with no littermates. Amberkit and the rest were her second litter.  I can't think of anything else so I'm leaving. Bye!