Heya,
So this is my very first book review, though I have been a part of many competition as a judge.
It has been such an overwhelming experience when, my readers ask me to review their books, especially from my fellow authors from the WangXian fan...
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In the world of unknown, how beautiful it is to find your soulmate? This book made me leave the mortal realm and experience pure fluff.
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Summary:
Wang Yibo, a dancer whose sole passion in life was his dance, until the day he hears a sweet sound of a bell tinkling near him.
The moment he hears them, he knows it somehow special to him.
Will Yibo meet the owner of those bells who also happens to own Yibo's heart? Read to find out!!!
My Review:
You need to change the coverpage! As I mentioned in the previous review too, your coverpage has to be in accordance with your story.
You need to work on the edits and pacing. The story has great potential, but it needs a little revamp.
This is such a sweet cotton candy fluff story! I imagined myself to be wrapped around a think blanket, holding a cup of coffee without sugar (I apparently don't like sweets), and rooting for Yibo all the way.
I loved the sweet element of surprise when I read the names of UNIQ members. That was Gwiyeobda* (cute in Korean).
So finally, if you're looking for a non complicated story, with an ultimate sugar rush: read this
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