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March lyrical flow!

This month, we have given a chance to rewrite a song and it's actually interesting to showcase the talent here in creating a similar song based on the original. I find it quite challenging as I couldn't understand it in the first place. I have tried somehow to make it look like a song. Let's see how it goes...

We have to select any of the following songs to rewrite...

List -

I have chosen two songs to rewrite -

* sound of silence
* eye of the tiger

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Song - 1

a little love

Hello teddy, my friend

It's me and you now, to love

There is no one for us to talk

As all are busy in their stalk

We shall make our life wow

Together in this world as silence remains

Like a massive fireball that could spread

Having a big house is of no use

When there are no people to choose

It's happening, I don't know why

Looking around, I heave a big sigh

Lord, make me the neon light

I say, please make me the neon light

Still, I want silence to pass this spree

I ignore as I saw

As nothing could be done

Beloved ones talking without speaking

Beloved ones listening without hearing

I turned my eyes over to my teddy

It was just me and him waiting to cuddle

Accepting the silence...

Sitting across them, I whispered 'dada'

As I say, ' take my hands and let's draw'

Hear me once, I will make you smile more

Cuddle me once, you will see peace soar

But, no one even dares to look at me

As it might disturb the sound of silence

Tears started to flood my eyes

I hugged my teddy as It muffled my cries

From the people sitting before me 

As they made my life a crying spree