Zodiac's Daily Life

Not An Update

Heya!
I didn't know that there are people still reading this book, I mean...
I wrote this book when I was around 14-15, last 2016.
And ugh, the cringe when I read this book 😫
The writing really sucks JDBJSBFJ.
I'm not sure about continuing this book... Should I?
Should I keep the sucky writing style even?
Or make it more descriptive?
Some might like it really plain.
I mean... I wasn't even expecting my book to get so many reads.
The last update was in 2018, I'm sorry guys 😭

So the reason why I stopped and came back is...
You see, as I grew older, I think I stopped some hobbies, such as writing, drawing.
I lost passion for the things I used to love.
I'm back though to give life to my past hobbies!
I'm trying to bring back the things I used to love, so I'll be writing more.
I'd like to say thanks to those who read my book and even commented.
It makes me happy to see that there are people still reading the book the younger me wrote.

So about continuing...
Should I?

If so, what kind of writing style should I do?

Should I keep this:

I saw Gemini...
She fell.

I walked to her and patted her head.
"Are you okay?"
I ask as I helped her stand.
"Yeah..."
She says with teary eyes.
She was kinda cute.

She suddenly runs away and falls again.

She stood and ran again.

I saw Leo came out of the room running.

Aquarius was chasing him.

"Leave me alone!"
He shouted and ran to me, hiding behind my back.

Or something more neat and a lil bit descriptive like this:

"Noooo!!!" I screamed after knowing that Leo, of all people, was my partner.

"Ma'am, why do you have to do this to me..." I whispered to the air.

"Shall we?" Leo grinned.

I glared at him before smacking him with the notebook I was holding.

"You better help me on this, no moves jerk. Got that?" I glared at him and he nervously chuckled.

"Of course haha. I'll order pizza." I gulped at what he said.

"Don't even try--- but... I'm kinda hungry so..." I sighed.

Why am I giving out to food...
It's just pizza...

But PIZZA iz ma layf.

"You know... You shouldn't eat too much, you'll get fat, maybe let's just cancel pizza." He suddenly said.
I don't know if he's joking or what, but I kill people who jokes like that.

"Let's have proper food instead, like a date---" I smacked him again.

"Pizza."

So guys! Tell me what you think!
I actually write more descriptive ones, but I'll keep it low for this book, because I don't think it would suit this book.
I'm also thinking of writing another book, and it would be great if you guys gave me your support.
Thank you!

Lovelots.