Nature at Play (new version)

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The sun

Relentlessly

Beats down on my back

The warmth

Seeping

All the way to the marrow of my bones

Even as it caresses my face with its gentle warmth

The wind

Plays with my hair

Gently

Leaving it a tangled mess.




Bonus Lines:

Zephyr

Done with his fun

Has left my coppery curls a veritable nest

Definitely an improvement.

A/N: How did it make you feel?  What was your favorite part?


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