The sun
Relentlessly
Beats down on my back
The warmth
Seeping
All the way to the marrow of my bones
Even as it caresses my face with its gentle warmth
The wind
Plays with my hair
Gently
Leaving it a tangled mess.
Bonus Lines:
Zephyr
Done with his fun
Has left my coppery curls a veritable nest
Definitely an improvement.
A/N: How did it make you feel? What was your favorite part?