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"Poetry is truly a work of art,
Quality's best when it comes directly from the heart,
Here's me trying to do my part,
So early don't you depart,
At least give my book a start!
With every vote and comment I'll jump i...
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Home- that's not known
Worn-out paints, flaking walls, Broken door, nameplate gone, Cobwebs, dust all around, Home that remains unknown!
Chilling frames, empty halls, Here resides Satan's spawn, Ghostly, uneven ground, Home with an evil throne!
In there, a baby crawls, Ghosts fry you like a prawn, Can't miss that eerie sound, Home that's a devil zone!
▪WHAT IS A RIMAS DISSOLUTAS?▪
Popular with 12th and 13th century French poets, rimas dissolutas is a poem that rhymes and doesn’t rhyme. For instance, each stanza contains no end rhymes, but each line in each stanza rhymes with the corresponding line in the next stanza–sometimes employing an envoi at the end.
For example, here’s how the end rhymes would work in a rimas dissolutas with three five-line stanzas:
1-a 2-b 3-c 4-d 5-e
6-a 7-b 8-c 9-d 10-e
11-a 12-b 13-c 14-d 15-e
(If the poem had an envoi, it might be 2-3 lines long using the c, d, and/or e rhymes.)
Note: There are no rules for meter, line length, or syllables–except that it should be consistent from stanza to stanza.
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That's all for now; Next update:Tomorrow
Adios amigos!❤❤
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