99 Problems and People are Every Single One of Them

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Wow this is a long ass chapter. But I just want to quickly say that  klprettykitty wrote all of Error's speech and actions up until the hospital scene, so can we just have a moment of appreciation for this absolute legend?  She's literally such a good writer, it's insane. If you haven't already checked out her Undertale AU Multiship book 'Daemons', I highly suggest you add it to your library. I mean if you like this book you'd DEFINITELY love Daemons.

Daemons: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169887638-daemons

Please check it out, it's literally my favourite Undertale fanfiction ever. 

So yeah, I was having a lot of trouble with the first scene. I'm not good at writing emotional scenes, so the amazing Kat helped me massively. I hope you guys enjoy what we managed to come up with, because Error suffered a great deal in this chapter... YAAAY! I swear, this book is all about just bullying Error...

Well, enjoy! (Oh and if you don't want to read this scene then honestly don't, it might upset anyone who doesn't want to see someone's life basically falling apart.)

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"What the hell was that?" Four shouted.

"I don't know!"

"And I don't just mean what you were going to do to Alpha, I also mean the fight! What was that? I was watching the whole thing thinking, 'these guys are gonna kill each other accidentally'!" Four sighed in disappointment. "You'd think after all of these years of training, you'd be a bit better at this!"

"I-I'm sorry..."

Four payed no attention to the stutter in Error's voice, assuming it was either fear or guilt. "Don't apologise to me! Apologise to your team! You let them down, Error!"

"Good. Nightmare's a dick, Ink's a cold-hearted bastard, and Cross clearly never wanted me to lead this anyway."

Four rolled his eyes. "Really? That's what this is? Falling outs in your personal life did this? Error, I know working with people you don't get on with is had, but-!"

"LEAVE ME ALONE!" Error yelled, turning around so that he wasn't facing him.

Four raised his eyebrows. "Don't shout at me, kid."

Error just scoffed, refusing to turn around. "Oh, so you can shout at me all you want, but I can't? Why am I surprised by that stupid double standard?"

"I'm above you. You seem to have forgotten that."

"And what the hell makes you so much better than me?! What the hell do you that makes you soooo much better than the rest of us that are out there every day busting our asses to keep the multiverse from falling apart?"

"What I do is no concern of yours. You do what we say, you don't question us." Four glared at him.

Error whipped around, glaring at Four as he did so. "Well I'm questioning you now! You all sit around doing nothing but judging us and punishing us for trivial shit! Or absolutely nothing in the case of Alpha coming after me!"

"I saved your ass, so don't even try to go there." He raised his voice slightly, aggravation starting to show.

Error paused, his eyes narrowing suspiciously at the other skeleton. "Did you? Did you really save me? Or was that just another one of your schemes?"

"Error, I saved your life. There was no 'scheme', I saved you."

"And how am I supposed to believe you when you just stopped me from killing Alpha?! You're on his side, aren't you?!"

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