Newt's Greenie Glader Griever Girl

Untitled Part 8

serious trigger warning just in case: brief mention of rape in the chapter & discussion in a/n at the end.

preeveeuslee on teen wolf

omg ably and mihno arent back yet and gweneveeve and newt and tommy and every1else dont know what to do so were all waiting in the rian for htem to get back

why idd they go into the maze anyway

newt sayd to retarace bens footsteps but ehat good is that gonn do?

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TOMMYS POV

i don't know what to do about this but were all standngi next to the door waiting for them to get backand it stoped raining and its been ar eally lokng day like i woke up and talked to jnewt and sammantha and we chopped down a tree and talked to chuckie and ate food and then it rained and thats when we started worrieing about the mihno and ably and now were standing next to the door and waiting for them to come back.

i dont know about it tho i have this bac feeling like something happened.shouldnt they of been back bu now?

"They're not gonna make it back, are they?" Jeff, the ever-present Med-jack, is extremely worried for his friends. Minho and Alby are not only leaders but true friends of his, and he doesn't know what he'll do if either of them are hurt. He doesn't know what's going on with Kylie's name changing all the time or even why no one has questioned the girl's presence in the Glade in the first place, but the only thing on his mind right now is his missing friends, their impending doom closing in with every tick of Clint's watch beside him. Once those Doors close, Jeff—and everyone else in the Glade—knows they're gone for good.

"THERE THEY ARE" i yelt

i pointed at mihno carrieing ably on his back. he's giving him a piggy back ride! that looks like fun. mihnos rally strong, i wish hed give me a piggy back ride (⌣̩̩́_⌣̩̩̀)

thomihno 4evah!!11!!1!

this wired guy named jeff looked at me wired and was like "Are you jacked in the head, Thomas? You just pointed into the empty Maze corridor and yelled 'There!' two solid seconds before they even rounded the corner! How'd you even know they were there?"

idk wut hes talking about but newt looks like hes about to cry

oh lmao i forgot kris jener was here, she just ran into the maz to help them omg!!

KHLOE POV

she just ran into the maz to help them omg!! i did it becase mihno is my running partner and i just feel this wired connection with him. tommy too! every1 was yelling at me to come back, newtie was to.

the doors almost closed and gally - he's a realy meanie btw he tried to rape me earlier today but its no biggie bc newtie saved me - anyway gally was yelling at mihno to leave us hahah wut a peace of crap!

the dorse close but not before tommy ran throught the gap with every1 yeling at him and newt cried and screaming that he loves me becase now shes stuck in the maze

OMG THIS IS SO SCARY, I CANT BELIVE KOURTNEY GOT STUCK IN THE MAZ!!!!1!!1!

7 likes for the next chatper every1!!!!1

-wuddekewnwsnd

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alrighty, serious note, everyone. DON'T ROMANTICIZE RAPE. DON'T DO IT! i've seen this in far too many tmr fanfics, ESPECIALLY with gally being the rapist. THIS IS NOT OKAY. i'm begging you people not to, a) have gally be a dickwad in your fics because he's actually a very logical, reasonable person. his only problem is caring too much. and, in the books, being clinically ugly lmao. and b) don't have your oc get raped or even close to it.

THIS IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM. don't write things like that (or suicide, depression, self-harm, etc.) unless it actually advances the plot/character. and no, making newt realize how much the oc truly means to him because he could've lost her does not constitute as a serious plot advancement. put your oc in a car wreck or something if you want to go for that angle. or a ben-attack if it's in tmr. speaking of which, find more creative ways to put your oc in danger in tmr?? the maze is not the only danger. she got lost in the deadheads, she got attacked by someone who got stung, she accidentally cut herself really badly during her slicer trial. idk, just be creative ffs!

anyway, i'm not going to put in anything else like this in the rest of the story, i just wanted to address that all of the above are also cliches that really need to not be. thank you for coming to my ted talk.

ro·man·ti·cize
/rōˈman(t)əˌsīz/
(verb) to deal with or describe in an idealized or unrealistic fashion; make (something) seem better or more appealing than it really is.

last note, i'd also like to add that lmfao i just completely  gave up on my name sign-off this chapter, just take a look at that^^^^^

~wish