chapter 10 *Fixed

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        The next few days were the same except Brom and I were trying to figure out how to fit Dakaë into the picture he was complaining way to much. But he has doubled in size from how much he is eating. i can now ride him but I can't fly with him yet.Eragon and I have improved a lot in fighting we are using our swords now but none of us can really land a hit on each other. We were also approaching a town but I can't remember the name. 

        We were approaching a bridge that led into the town when some super greasy skinny guy kinda appeared out of no where demanding money so that we can cross his bridge. "how much is it?" Brom asked, the stranger thought for a second then said." Ten crowns."

"Ten crowns?Thats crazy!" Eragon blurted out I giggled a little and the strangers attention turned to me "Whats a pretty lady like you doing out here?"He asked, before I could answer he turned to brom and said " You can have all my crowns and can cross the bridge if I can keep the pretty lady." Eragon after hearing this stood between me and the stranger. He seemed a little protective to me. Brom looked at Eragon and I then said to the guy. "Sorry but no." Then handed him the money.I walked past the guy with my head held high. If that man lays a finger on you I will kill him and never leave your side no matter what Dakaë told me I smiled as Brom pretended to trip, landing on the stranger " sorry, so clumsy of me." Brom said and got up I slowed down because I had no idea where we were. Eragon slowed down with me Brom taking the lead. "You didn't need to protect me back there I'm not some weak,pathetic girl, you of all people should know this" I reminded Eragon 

"I was-well-um-I-um" Eragon stuttered

"Its fine but why did you do it?" I asked 

"um I-I well I just maybe um like you." Eragon mumbled. Did I hear correctly? Eragon the most powerful person in a book likes me. Eragon looked at me to see if i heard. I smiled at him leaned in and whispered in Eragon ear "I like you too." A big smile spread across his face. Brom peeked back at us a smug look on his face.Desiree you are walking on ice becareful in which steps you take Dakaë cautioned. The look on Eragons face told me that Saphira was talking to him also. Eragon won't hurt me I know this I said to him. We entered a horse stable and a man was taking care of a white horse. Brom cleared his throat. " Hello, What can I do for ya?"  The man says

"we need three of your fastest horses and the right stuff aslo." Brom says.
 As usuall I tune them out I don't really care about marketing stuff. I walk over to a black horse with a white line going down its forehead to its nose. I strace the white streak. I'll name it Lightning. I start petting Lightning it didn't nay or back away. My grandmother said I was good with animals. I examine Lightning. He had strong legs, well groomed coat , and a lean body. He was made for running. My attention drifts off to Eragon who was with another horse. I pat Lightning and walk over to Eragon."careful this horse is quite jumpy." Eragon says. I pet the horse with no problem at all. Eragon just looks at me shocked. I smile at him.

         Brom comes over to us commanding." I'll take snowfire. Eragon you will get this horse and Desiree you will get that black horse saddle them up and lets get moving." I nodded and picked up a saddle and approach my horse.
         
          After getting everything ready I hop on my horse and we leave the town. We were on a trial heading to the next town at a steady trot. "Where are you from?" Eragon asks me
"You wouldn't believe me. " I answer
"I'll believe you" I look at his pleadings eyes
"I'm from a different world."
"Wow what is it like?"
"It is amazing my world is way more advanced like instead of a bow we have a gun when you pull the trigger the animal you are hunting drops dead if you have a good enough aim"
"That's impossible"
" I would show you a video if I had my phone. WAIT. I brought my phone here. It must be were I met Brom" Brom listening to my conversation said." Is this it?" Pulling my phone out of his pocket.
"Yes! That is it." I exclaim snatching my Samsung S2 out of his hand. I press the power button. It turns on "yes it still has some battery left." I mumble to myself.  Eragon who was looking over my shoulder asked"what does it do?" I smile and say. " lots of things." I quickly put in my password and open my pictures. Eragon watches with amazement. I start showing Eragon pictures and videos of life at my world. Eragon was amazed at what it did. He kept asking questions. Once I showed him all my pictures I put on my music and stuffed my phone in my pocket. Eragon and Brom look at me shocked
"How is it doing that?"Eragon questioned
" that's another thing it does."

       The path opened up a vast plain I looked down which was pretty far. "It will take about a day to get to the bottom so lets camp here."  Eragon and I nod our heads simultaneously. As we eat a small dinner I wander on how much Dakaë and I make a difference in this world. I smile, I must be a very lucky person to be here and to have a dragon, but out of all colors he was gold why not another color like purple? I will never know. Eragon came up to me asked." Do you really know my future?"

I look at him as he sits next to me." I do and if you want to know your future I'm not going to tell you." I respond

"Their is one thing I have to know." He pleaded

"and what is that?"

"do I kill the ra'zac?"  He begged I looked at him and gave in

" You do but not anytime soon I am Not telling you anything else." I said  laying down  and closing my eyes. "Thank you." Eragon whispers in my ear. As I begin to drift off.

        The next morning we began the steep decent toward the plains. The sun was blazing down at us putting everyone in a bad mood.By the time we reached the bottom the sun was close to the horizon. "Lets cover some ground before the sun sets ok?" Brom said urging Snowfire ahead. We braved the plains and charged toward the barren land.

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I'm sorry for changing most of this chapter I realized that I accidental skipped a few chapters in Eragon I hope I didn't upset any readers I'm only correcting my mistakes. Hang in there guys!

       

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