The initiation: Met in abnegation sequel

Chapter 11

Tris pov:

I sit in the chair in front of the computer screens and place my hands on the mouse. After a moment, I remember I don't know how to work a computer. "Tris what's going on?" Tobias asks.
Peter and I explain to Tobias that I want to find out why the doctors put the memory serum in me and why they lied about my death. Tobias looks down and appears to be thinking. After a while his eyes light up in realization. "Almost all of the doctors here are from Erudite. Since Jeanine is locked up in dauntless, the doctors most likely visited her and received orders to kill you. That still doesn't explain why you are still alive."
"Unless I know one of them." I say with wide eyes. We all exchange glances and run out of the room heading towards the hospital.

We burst through the doors and I look around. I walk up to the front desk and say to the lady sitting behind the counter "I need all of your doctors and nurses to gather so I can see all of them."
"I can't do that f-" she starts, but I slam my hand down on her desk "I said I need them to be gathered." She quickly calls them all to the front room we are in. After a few minuets they are all gathered. Peter makes them stand in one long line. I stand back and look at them all trying to see if I recognize any of them. There is one male doctor that is large and broad, his head is hanging low and a medical mask is covering the lower half of his face. "Everyone, but you leave." I say pointing at the man. They all quickly file out of the room. I slowly walk up to the man observing the way his foot taps quickly and the sweat forming on his forehead.
I am about to reach for his mask to pull it down, when I smell it. I gag, and stare at him wide eyed with tears flooding them. That's when his eyes meet mine. Hatred fills my whole being and I scream in his face "I hate you! I don't care if you kept me alive. Don't ever come anywhere near me again." I run out the door and hear Zeke, Tobias, and Peter screaming my name. All I can do is keep running. I run past my initiates who are staring wide eyed at what they are seeing, all of them calling for me to stop and tell them what's wrong. I run to Tobias and I's apartment. I fall to my knees as the door slams shut. All I can think of is my hatred for the smell of Lemongrass and sage.

Hey Initiates, I have something sad to tell you. The chapter after this one will be the last chapter of this story. If you want to know why, there are many reasons.

1. I never truly wanted to write this story, I didn't want to do a sequel, but everyone asked for it. Yet, nobody really read it.

2. I feel like the characters in this are way too OOC from the last Fanfic.

3. This is becoming to be a stupid story, it's all just going down hill. I shouldn't have made this sequel, because in my honest opinion, the story would have been better if I just left it on that last cliff hanger.

4. I have no motivation, I have more fanfics that I want to be writing and this one is just a burden.

So Ya! I'm sorry for any of you guys that actually liked this crappy story, but don't worry there will be an ending!

QOTD: Would you rather eat dauntless cake with Tobias, or go Ziplining with Uriah?

My answer: UGH SO HARD! I think I would go Ziplining with Uriah. 😬😱 I think I could make more memories that way.

Remember to be eaton that cake!