The Laws of Falling in Love by @RyeCather
Sorry this is so late!
Strange opening that was so intriguing it became confusing! (In a good way.
The first chapter was a blast - Alex was quirky and funny. Nice touch with the tree barks.
I'll tag you in a critique where I explain to others how to format dialogue correctly. Only little changes are needed
More description would be welcome - for example with the bit I mentioned with the punch in the gut. It will give it more of an edge.
Clever how you have the Laws at the beginning to match the title.
I found it grew more cliched towards the end of the 3 chapters.
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