What follows here will be the unedited NaNoWriMo 2019 form of the climax and falling action of Percival's Tale.
Quite frankly, it's rubbish. The climax has severe pacing issues, to the point of being anticlimactic, and the story itself feels plot driven rather than character driven, and I would vastly prefer the inverse.
That being said, Version 2 of Percival's Tale is in progress, and edits are being made. Most of 10-16 will have minor edits, but almost everything before and after that is going to be completely rewritten. (Blessedly, the prologue is virtually cut, so you won't have to drudge through that travesty for much longer.)
I've also selected new, shortish names, as most of the previous names were functionally illegible and practically unpronounceable. So you have that to look forward to.
I'll be uploading the last chapters, incomplete or otherwise, over the course of the next day or two.
That's all for not,
Isaiah
YOU ARE READING
Of The Line Of Estelondo: Percival's Tale.
FantasyDuring the years of Darkness, a half-elven male named Gary Gygax usurped the throne, and killed off the entire royal family of Meneltarma, except the four youngest, who escaped. Now, the four siblings, The heirs of Elven Royals, wander around the La...
