RESULT - SHORT STORY (WINNERS)

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Hello lovely writers

Short Story is judged by bowdownpeasantz Kailucy, and -Navyah-. The judges have done a great job with scores and review by pointing out good and bad points of your books. If you want to ask anything regarding the result feel free to PM them which will help in improving your skills.

We have included the whole card so that you can get to know where you need more focus.

We are proud to announce the winners of Short Story.

1st Position

Book name: The Mockery of Light

Author name: avadel

Judge name: -Navyah-

Overall: 57/60 

Review: Book cover totally relates to the contents of the stories that this book hold. Blurb is eye catching and so is the opening chapter. This is a piece of art with dark and deep elements beautifully blend with each other. Imagination of writer is like finding constellations in a dusty sky, I'm highly impressed. Stories seem totally realistic. I highly enjoyed reading your work. You are unique, keep penning.

Criteria 1) Book Cover &Title: 10/10

Criteria 2) Description/Blurb: 4.5/5

Criteria 3) Style & Verbal Skills: 9/10

Criteria 4) Character: 4.5/5

Criteria 5) Language: 10/10

Criteria 6) Grammar, Vocabulary, and Spellings: 19/20

2nd Position

Book name: Lily of the valley

Author name: @goldphish

Judge name: Kailucy

Overall: 56/60

Review: This story moved me, the way the author wove the words was stunning. I could read this over and over and never grow tired of it. I'm so impressed by how well this was written and in only one chapter.

Criteria 1) Book cover and title: 9/10

Criteria 2) Description: 4/5

Criteria 3) Style and verbal skill     10/10

Criteria 4) Character:  5/5

Criteria 5) Language:  9/10

Criteria 6) Grammar, vocabulary, and spellings: 19/20


3rd Position

Book name: Tides Of Obsession

Author name: AdultOfTheFuture

Judge name: -Navyah-

Overall: 55/60

Review: Firstly the book cover and title are astounding. The character description is real, reminds me of 'Veronica Lodge' from 'Riverdale'. I'm highly impressed with author's vocabulary and style of expression creating the perfect scenario full of emotions. Although the pace is a bit slow yet keeps the readers curious to dive in the love story of a hopeless romantic protagonist. You are unique, keep penning.

Criteria 1) Book Cover &Title: 10/10

Criteria 2) Description/Blurb: 4.5/5

Criteria 3) Style & Verbal Skills: 8.5/10

Criteria 4) Character: 5/5

Criteria 5) Language: 9/10

Criteria 6) Grammar, Vocabulary, and Spellings: 18/20

Congratulations to the winners ❤
All the winners i.e., 1st, 2nd and 3rd position winners have to mail us at oceanpearlawards@gmail.com to claim stickers. They have to mention their name and genre in the mail. Moreover, you have to send us the winning book cover for the hall of fame/winners book.

Thanking you,

The Ocean Pearl Awards.

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