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Laurel grabbed her jacket and left the cabin in despair. She felt a striking pain in her chest as tears effortlessly run down her face. How could she be so stupid to trust such a douchebag. She felt lost. It was barely three hours after the kiss, after tasting his minty, soft tongue, after cuddling in his arms, after looking straight into his hazel eyes and telling herself he'd be the best thing she'd ever have. All those thoughts fuelled more tears.But why was she feeling this way? It's not like she was his girlfriend. Rain kept pouring down but she cared less.
She walked till she couldn't anymore. She took shelter in the cafeteria. She was soaking wet and all she needed was hot chocolate. After ordering, she grabbed out her phone and searched who to contact.
Anna? Hell no! Though she knew very well Anna sometimes gave good advice and solutions in such crisis, telling her she hooked up with her crush will result to two broken hearts something she wasn't ready for that she opted for Victor,her twin brother.
Laurel: He played me Victor,he was just using me. Laurel broke down.
Victor: What do you mean? Ken? Are you back together?That son of a b... Hijo de puta!
Laurel: No, it's not him. Laurel sobbed. It's Louis. I met him a couple of weeks ago and I thought he really liked me but turns out all men...
Victor : Don't say that Laurel. Calm down. I'll come by the l tomorrow to teach that scumbag a lesson
Laurel: I called you so that you could help me not plan a wrestling match Vicky!
Victor : I'm sorry. Boys will always be boys, it's time you find a gentleman little sissy
Laurel:Hey, You're only five minutes older you know.
Victor: Guess what I did in those five minutes?
Laurel: Admire the nurse's boobs?
Victor: You're an asshole, you know that?
Laurel: No am not hermano pequeño
Víctor: You're the younger so don't call me pequeño. Anyway,Debo decirle a mamá sobre esto?
Laurel: Don't you dare! You know how mama worries about everything. I'll be fine. Gracias por estar aquí para mí siempre.
Víctor: Fine I won't tell mama but promise you'll be okay. I love you mi hermana.
Laurel:I will. Bye Vicky.Laurel felt a little bit better after her conversation with Victor. They had a connection only the heavens could break and she couldn't trade it for anything else. Even though she still felt hurt,at least she knew things would get better.
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"Dude we're sorry,I mean how were we supposed to know that you for the first time really liked..." Owen nervously tried explaining to the now fuming Louis.
"You Carlos, why did you even talk you stupid son of a bitch! DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE YOU ASSHOLE!!" Louis was burning in anger.
"I'm sorry man.... I've always thought you just..." Carlos couldn't find the exact words to say.
" Just what? Just fuck around? Yes I did fuck around but she was different. Thanks to you, you've ruined any chances of us being together. Are you happy now? Louis shouted.
He felt broken. Yes he was stupid, yes he was a fuckboy but Laurel was different. He liked her. He really did.
The room was filled with sudden silence. Carlos felt stupid and Owen couldn't figure out who which one to help."Hey,umm, Louis why don't you go look for her. You can talk things out." Owen decided to break the silence.
" We can he..."
" Shut the fuck up you little rat. Pray to God that she forgives me,or else Owen will have you for dinner." Carlos muttered as he grabbed two jackets and headed out slamming the door. He pulled out a cigarette and decided to smoke on his way. Times like this made him a maniac.
It was cold outside. Louis couldn't imagine how laurel was feeling at the moment. He felt guilty. All these crazy thoughts filled his head making him almost explode.Where the hell could she be? How was she holding up at such a time? Was she sick? Did someone take advantage of her? Was she torn apart by a bear?
All these thoughts terrified Louis even more.After 30 minutes of searching tirelessly for Laurel,he managed to find her at the cafeteria. Her eyes were swollen. He felt awful. Why did he deserve her. Even in her lowest she managed to look pretty. He walked slowly till he reached the table where she sat. Her hands were grabbing the cup like it would be snatched from her any second.
"Hey, can we talk?" Louis asked avoiding to look straight into her eyes.
" What do you want? To fuck around with me? Like you always do with the other girls?"
" No Laurel that's not what I want. All I want is you. "
" How the hell should I believe that? How am I supposed to believe you?"
" Listen Laurel,yes I've been a douchebag. I've had sex with multiple girls some I can't remember their faces. " Louis paused for a while as he tried to take a look at Laurel's reaction. She looked disgusted by him but he wasn't giving up anytime soon.
" But with you it's different Laurel. You changed me. You've made me see meaning of life again. You've helped me with studies. You've not been with just for the publicity and stuff. I've never felt this before. Trust me Laurel,I like you. I like you soo bad that I can't and won't give up on you anytime soon. "
Laurel was now conflicted. Looking at him made her feel like she could trust him once again. Yes, she was mad at him but that was erased by those hazel eyes and amazing daze that came from him.
"Ok. I forgive you but don't play games with my heart Louis Derick Flynn." Laurel gave a blush
" Don't call me Derrick, I'm good with Louis Flynn and trust me, your heart will forever be safe and sound with me as long as you promise to trust me." Louis smirked.
"Okay Der..."
"I said don't..."
Heavy rain was pattering down on the streets.
"Wait, wait," he suddenly told her as they left the cafeteria.
Under his jacket, she looked at him surprised, with an expectant look on her face: "What is it?"
Panting he stood before her: "You forgot to give me a chance to tell you that I love you. More than I have ever imagined that I could love someone!"
"Oh, Louis!" She fell round his neck. Suddenly teardrops were mixing with the pouring rain: "I promise to love you forever, every single day of eternity," she sighed. "Being with you is... like magic."
They kissed passionately under the open sky, lost in a bubble of time and space, not even noticing the heavy waterfalls pouring down on them while they were getting soaking wet.
He handed her the extra jacket and they headed to the cabin. The one thing that Louis wanted from her was trust and all that Laurel wanted was loyalty.
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The Mess with the Message
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