Chapter 17

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*Time Lapse to the fights*

Carrie POV (New POV yay)

I have bitten my nails right down to their beds waiting to be told who I will be fighting. I can be it will either be Adam my best friend or Tanya muscle woman. That's normally my luck. Either of the two people I least want to fight, I end up fighting. I mentally sigh, ah well I guess no one can have everything. It's just that I don't think I have anything.

I have known Tanya since I was in nappies. At first, we were inseparable. We would go everywhere together, do everything together and we could be a little crazy together. One game we always used to play was ninjas. We would set missions to take some fruit from the kitchens or listen in to someone's conversation and we would practice our karate chops.

But in the later years, she lost her magic touch. When she first went through the net, I thought I had got her back but dauntless has trained her into a ruthless young woman and one I would not like to associate with.

I glance up to the board with our matches on and see that I am going in the middle of the pairings. Against Adam. I don't want to kick him out of dauntless if he loses but I don't want to be kicked out if I lose. I sigh. Just my luck.

I cautiously step into the ring and try to remember what Six did. But I can't, and couldn't, not even to save my life. So I punch him in the stomach and he knees me in the stomach. I double over and stagger back and he charges towards me...

A/N I was going to do way more but my phone's battery is about to die and I couldn't not do an update!

574 VIEWS. THAT'S 114 VIEWS IN ROUGHLY 24 HOURS. I AM SPEECHLESS! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am updating this chapter so it is longer!!!!!

Tris POV

I can't help but hope that Carrie wins this fight. She reminds me so much of myself, not trained, not strong but determined.

She throws a good punch at Adam but he knees her in the stomach. She stumbles back so he takes the advantage to charge at her. But just in time, she gets down low and rolls out of the way. Then she kicks his shins and he falls to the ground. Carrie gets up and is about to kick him in the ribs but he grabs her leg and pulls her down. He punches her in the jaw and and she punches her in the stomach, her eyes pleading to let them stop.

I wish I could relieve them but they are a pretty even match and it doesn't seem like either of them are going to black out any time soon. I wish I could stop it but I don't want to appear to have favoritism or to let them go when that's what I had to go through.

Adam POV

I am against Carrie. Great I'm against my crush. I don't want to kick her out of dauntless but I don't want to be kicked out either. And the sick rules of dauntless means that one person has to win. I mentally sigh and reluctantly conclude that if she goes vicious, I will too.

We steo into the ring and she throws a strong punch at me so as a reflex, I kick her stomach. I shouldn't have done that: I hurt her! But I run towards her hoping she'll dodge away. She does but whilst rolling to the side, managed to kick me in the shins. Hard.

I fall to the ground anf she gets up. I watch her so much do I predict her next move and grab her leg before she can hurt me more. So I punch her in the jaw and she punches me in the stomach with a hurt look in her eye. I mutter sorry and I mean it but I doubt she heard it.

It would be better for both of us if one of us blacked out and she, I think, is closer to it, so I punch her nose and her jaw and kick her ribs. Her nose bleeds and her eyes slowly close. I sink to the ground and ask if I could take her unconscious body to the infirmity. Four grants permission so I take her there.

I am a monster. I did this to the one I love! I have never loved anyone anywhere near as much as I love Carrie and I did this to her. I will never forgive myself.

We get to the infirmity and I find a kind looking nurse called Shauna. She is very careful with Carrie but refuses to let me stay. Sighing, I submit and drag my feet back to the training room. It is going to be a long day.

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