I'm thinking about rewriting the story a bit, I just feel like MC and the system needs to be a little more crazy. But I want to ask what do you think of those parts
-Fuze killing Y/N
-Angel
-Marines breaking 4th wall
-Desperate aunt
Do you find them funny or should I rewrite them a bit?
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Fate Breaker (Malereader x harem)
UmorismoEver wanted to land into alternative version of world where demi humans replaced normal humans? Well, you just had to be killed by a Fuze and meet your guardian angel! Now with slightly weird and self-aware RPG system with annoying personality, Y/N...
