The Constellations Awards [CLOSED]

🌟Capricorn Results🌟

Thank you Appledip_14 zhinchedand kookkannan for judging these books and spending your valuable time to give them reviews.

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🌟The first place goes to🌟:

Name of the book: If the World Was Ending
Name of the Author: ABrunetteGirl
Total score: 76/80
Review:
Your blurb is excellent! I've always liked stories where the protagonists go on an adventure. So when I read the blurb, not only was I thrilled, but I instantly knew that I would like your story. Your grammar is flawless. I didn't notice any typographical errors, mistakes in the usage of punctuation marks, and etc. I love your characters' names; they fit their own personality. The name Mila sounds like someone who's very serious and methodical (which is her character) and Warner sounds like someone who does his very best to have fun (which also is his character). The plot was flowing smoothly. It didn't seem rushed and it also didn't go too slow. Good job!

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🌟The second place goes:🌟

Name of book: Ashes of the Phoenix - the fade
Name of the Author: theashesofthephoenix
Total score: 72/80
Review: While reading your book, I could already tell that creating your own characters was your greatest strength. The plot development was as perfect as the character development. Jag and Fade are very distinct from each other which made the story a whole lot more interesting. The blurb really intrigued me. It practically boosted my motivation to read and judge your story. The chapters were perfectly written, although there were periods missing in some of the sentences. I love the illustrations of your characters; they definitely helped me picture them. Your vocabulary is flawless. Overall, you did a really great job!

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🌟Third place goes to:🌟

Name of the book: Wild Beauty
Name of the Author: brighteverafters
Total score: 71/80
Review:
The title seemed a little plain. I wasn't intrigued by your story at all until I read your amazingly constructed blurb! At first, I thought it would've been better if you informed the readers what Gipus Curse was in the blurb, but when I saw you explained everything thoroughly in the prologue, I changed my mind. I love this line: Lives must be sacrificed to redeem others. For the first few chapters I read, your plot was going smoothly and the characters were perfectly described, and so were the scenes. But, I feel like the chapters seemed too serious. The more I read, the less interested I became. I'm sure your book has an amazing spice in it, but I suggest you make sure not only to hook your readers but to make them stay hooked. Overall, I'm sure your book is pretty great! The concerns I shared with you were just minor, and all of them are totally fixable! Good luck! :)

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🌟The 4th place goes to🌟:

Name of the book : St. Agnes home forcriminal girls
Name of author : celaenamoon
Total score : 68/80
Review : The construction is clever piquing the reader's interest slowly. Has a good and unique writing style. Hope this story gets completed, and in a good way