MY ADORABLE SHOP 01 (CLOSED)
This shop will help you to improve your writing skills though I'm not that professional.And it will help you to gain more reads,votes,comments,and lastly followers.
The perks of this shop?
-Gain more readers and follower...
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Disclaimer: These are solely intented for the betterment and improvement of your story. If you think my words are below to belt then try to DM me,so we could talk privately. Thank you!
Caution: Spoilers Ahead
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I've seen a lot of title like yours.You don't have to change it kasi bagay na bagay siya sa plot ng story.That's it,is good tho!
Book cover:10/10
It's so beautiful and the moon it is really perfect for the plot of your story.The banners are really good too!
Synopsis: 13/15
Well I don't have nothing to say with it.It's very catchy like the readers will think and curiousity will kill us.And that's good kasi sa synopsis pa lang nakuha mo na 'yung atensyon ng readers!
Plot:37/40
I like the plot of your story.Very pinag handaan couz I think you do some research about that.I like the prologue of your story,curiousity is killing me.And kay Alice it's so creepy but thankfuly because Selene explained it on the next chapter.Nasa chapter 4 pa lang ako so I don't know what will be happen next.Anong mangyayari sa love story nila Cadmus and Selene.Sa powers ni Selene (I don't really think that's powers,sorry).Then anong mangyayari when moon staring to fall down on the earth.And of course the ending.A sci-fi,is a new genre to me.And I haven't read that kind of story like yours so well done sa plot!
Writing Skills:14/20
Sorry,but naguluhan ako sobra sa pagkakasulat mo.Sometimes 'di 'ko na alam kung sino na ba 'yung nagsasalita.I suggest to use some 'I said' 'I exclaimed' 'I hissed'.Then put some spaces.Then use highlights if it's needed.Stop puting this one (") if nasa isip lang ng character 'yung sasabihin niya like.
Example: •"my gosh what did I do?" (wrong) • my gosh what did I do
And use highlights if need lang.Add some jokes para di masyadong boring like don't focus too much on the plot I mean sometimes add an extra scene that some readers will like it!
Uniqueness:5/5
Just like what I've said,It was my first time to read that kind of plot.Very Unique!
Effort:5/5
Well every writer always put an effort on their stories.And mahaba every chapter,which was good to your readers.Hindi sila mabibitin sa update mo.Good job!
Over All: 88
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