MY ADORABLE SHOP 01 (CLOSED)
This shop will help you to improve your writing skills though I'm not that professional.And it will help you to gain more reads,votes,comments,and lastly followers.
The perks of this shop?
-Gain more readers and follower...
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Disclaimer: These are solely intented for the betterment and improvement of your story.If you think my words are below to belt then try to DM me,so we could talk privately.Thank you!
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Unchain My Heart (Royal Series 1) Written by: _alvsss Genre: Romance,Teen Fic
Title:5/5
It's really good,very fit on your plot!
Book cover:7/10
Sorry,but I think you need to chang it.It's good but it's not catchy.Madami akong alam na 'graphic shops' that will help you.If you're interested just DM me okay?
Synopsis: 13/15
I really like your synopsis,you get my attention which was good.The curiousity is killing me like 'I want to read it' 'I wanna know what will be happen in this story'.Hindi din siya mahaba like sa ibang story.Very perfect!
Plot: 39/40
To he honest,nakulungan ako sa prologue.At first naboring ako kasi ang daming pagpapakilala and something.But when Nikka joined the story.Nawala 'yung pag ka bored ko,I love how bitch they are.They're really a Queens for me (my favorite is Madi).It's kinda funny but kinikilig ako kina Kendra and Jaden.Lalo na 'yung sa rooftop scene and the dinner scene too.How sad kasi hanggang chapter 5 lang 'yung nabasa ko.I don't know what will he happen on their love story but please give them a happy one.I don't have nothing to say with your plot.It's so good and I love it!
Writting Skills:17/20
Okay,I've seen a lot of errors but I know you'll edit that after you finished the whole series.I recommend you to put some spaces and translations too.That's it!
Uniqueness:3/5
I just want to he honest with you...your plot is one of the most common plot in the wattpad world.You don't have to change the plot,it's good tho!
Effort:5/5
Apparently,Authors must have to put an effort on their stories.Nakaka-ilang words ka every chapter couz I find it mahaba.Well done!
Overall: 89%
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