MY ADORABLE SHOP 01 (CLOSED)
This shop will help you to improve your writing skills though I'm not that professional.And it will help you to gain more reads,votes,comments,and lastly followers.
The perks of this shop?
-Gain more readers and follower...
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Disclaimer: These are solely intented for the betterment and improvement of your story.If you think my words are below to belt then try to DM me,so we could talk privately.Thank you!
Caution: Spoilers Ahead
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Sincerely Yours,Andromeda Written by: yssellen Genre: Romance
Title:3/5
I don't really know if kung bakit ganiyan 'yung title but just like what I've said hindi ko pa naman siya natapos.But I know naman na may meaning yan so I'm giving you 3 points!
Book Cover:8/10
It's cute though but I hope si Selena and Zayne 'yung face claim.No need to change the book cover kasi story mo naman 'yun!
Synopsis:15/15
Why I gave you a perfect score?Well that's exactly the synopsis that I want.So simple,catchy,and there's a description of the main characters.Good job on that,Author!
Plot: 37/40
The prologue was good,it went well and hindi ako nakulangan. On the chapter one of course naguluhan ako sa mga character.Btw it's good kasi sa first part pa lang nandoon na 'yung mga attitudes nila so apparently mapapadali nalang sa readers na kilalanin sila.I agree with Hylla,sobra ng toxic ng social media unlike dati na chill chill lang.It's sad to say but nagiging toxic na din ang mga fandom dito anyways I laughed so hard when Felix join the story,and sa part na 'yun nandoon na 'yung description nila,it's good to know na nagtake ng civil engr si Felix.So let's go back to Zayne and Selena,I love how their first encounter went,most common but you make it different.Natatakot akong mag Senior highschool dahil sa sinabi ni Kuya Cla,I can't believe that ganun kastress 'yun.So kinilig ako sa pag hatid ni Zayne kay Selena how he skip the practice,gosh it's cute hahaha!And of course hanggang doon nalang 'yung naread ko.I'm a little bit curious about sa message ng Daddy ni Selena but I hope I still have time to finish it,you know school works hahaha! (itawa nalang 'yun mga forms sa school)
Writting Skills:18/20
'Di naman siya gaanong magulo,hindi rin ako naguluhan.Errors?wala naman akong nakita,sa spacing lang ako may problem.Using highlights into message was good.Keep doing that!
Uniqueness:5/5
From the title,the plot,the names,and all are unique for me!
Effort: 5/5
Nothing to say with it.I think nakaka 2000 plus words ka,every chapter is long.And that's good 'di mabibitin readers mo.
OverAll: 91%
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Btw I didn't finish your story I actually read 8 parts only,sorry so busy on school works these past few days...
