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The cover is great, I just think the font could go a little bolder to make it stand out the tiniest bit more. Otherwise its perfect.
Blurb – 5/5
To the point, just giving enough information to make the readers inquisitive about the book. Well written.
Grammar and Punctuation – 9.5/10
Barely found any errors, just a few grammatical stuff probably twice while reading. I think the editing is well done as well.
Writing Style – 10/10
I'd say beautiful. There's literally nothing to make it better, it's already perfectly written. The additions of graphics inbetween is beautiful as well.
Character development – 10/10
The pace of character development is great and the female protagonist is written about perfectly.
Plot/Storyline – 10/10
The flow is perfect and not too nagging. It makes me want to read more and more with each chapter.
Overall enjoyment – 15/15
I just can't wait to read more, it's a beautiful book. I know many cliché's about a girl having a messed up life but this one doesn't make me feel like it's a cliché. It's just a beautiful original story.
The title could've been a little more creative because the book seems to be amazing as far as I've read and it'll help gain readers if you make it a little more catchy. But that's still a pretty fine title cause every author has their reason behind the title and I'm sure you do too. J
