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Friend VS Love (aubrey 02)

Title: Friend VS Love by 

Reviewer: Aubrey 

• Title 5/5

Your title is great! Like I haven't even started reading your book yet, you are already making me choose. It really gave me an idea on what your story is all about.

• Cover 2/5

I still think that you could upgrade your cover into something much better. Don't get me wrong, it is cute BUT the colors of the texts aren't really complementing the background image. Moreover, I could barely see the quotation (I read wattpad using my phone btw, just in case you were wondering).
I suggest that you try out our graphic shop! We have a lot of talented staffs in our graphic shop so you should definitely check it out!

• Description 4/5

Your description was enough to grab my attention and make me click the "Read" button. In my opinion, your description really complements the title that you've given your book, "Friend VS Love". I could clearly see who the 'friend' is and who the 'love' is. And with that, you did an AMAZING job. BUT, you should fix the quotations as well as the spaces in them.

• Grammar and Punctuation 15/20

I've noticed a few mispelled words as well as lack of punctuations but I guess it's okay. As a fellow writer, I know that it is inevitable to have a few mispelled words here and there BUT, you know, if ever you reread your work again and notice those mispelled words, then, feel free to correct it (also, feel free to message me so that I could help you out). One more thing, the pronoun 'I' should be capitalized all the time as well as the word 'God'.
What I've mentioned above is NOT a major problem, believe me, as your book was really enjoyable to read BUT as your reviewer, I feel like I should point out whatever it is that I notice so that I could help you improve your book.

• Plot and Storyline 18/20

In my opinion, I think it has an interesting plot and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it. I know that this is inspired from a movie and I haven't really watched it BUT I hope that eventhough this is inspired from a movie, you make it a bit different. Like there could be some aspects wherein it is just the same from the movie but some aspects should be coming from your own imagination, you know, to make it original.
When I was reading your book, I felt myself getting drawn to the story as it was really entertaining to read. And with that, I'm totally waiting for an update.

• Pacing 10/10

The pacing of the story is just right, not too fast nor too slow, it's just somewhere in between. And, I really like reading books with this kind of pace as it gives me something to look forward to.

• Emotions and Characters 18/20

Both Y/N and Jungkook as well as the 'family members' have a very interesting personality. I could really feel that they are really 'friends' as their actions and words really show it.
I know that this book is still ongoing and all so I could not really finalize anything BUT so far, SO GOOD! The emotions that the story wants to convey is really there and the characters are well thought of, so...Good job!

• Ending 10/10

I know that this book is still ongoing (it only has around 8 chapters as of now) so I really couldn't judge/review its ending yet BUT I will give it a perfect score as I would like the author (you) to live up to the score I have given her book.

• Personal Enjoyment 5/5

Your story is great! I hope you continue it until the very end and I would totally support your book until the end so please, keep on writing!