Living in Omelas (Soda 06)

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Reviewer: Enhypened_Eggie 

Author: @aradhyashukla

Book: Living in omelas 

Title:- 5/5 

Cover:- 5/5

Description:- 2/5

Grammar and punctuations:- 18/20 

Plot and Storyline:- 16/20 

Pacing:- 9/10 [The pace of the story] 

Emotions and characters:- 10/20 

Ending:- 0/10 (no ending yet) 

Personal enjoyment:- 2/5 

Total: 67/100

Review: 

book cover and title are wonderful. the description could be better though. don't do things like time skips, that just makes it all unprofessional and a mess tbh. as well as dialogue format. it's very messy and you can't explain things better like that. emotions and explanations are not correctly done.

 emotions and explanations are not correctly done

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