Min Yoongi X Save Me (soda 02)

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Title: Min Yoongi X Save Me

author: @HyunglineRX

reviewer: Soda


Title:- 3/5 

Cover:- 4/5 

Description:- 2/5 

Grammar and punctuations:- 17/20 

Plot and Storyline:- 14/20 

Pacing:- 7/10 

 Emotions and characters:- 15/20 

Ending:- 6/10 

 Personal enjoyment:- 2/5 

Total: 70/100 

review:

 writing in dialogue format isn't going to get you anywhere really. to understand the feelings of the character and get deep into what they feel you need something better. i like the overall idea but right now it needs more.

 i like the overall idea but right now it needs more

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