THE EGO REVIEW SHOP

BTS Oneshots /Scenarios Book 1 (Eunji 04)

· Title: BTS Oneshots/Scenarios Book 1

· Author: @Hyunglinerx

· Title (3/5)

I thought the title was fitting, since it is a book of oneshots. But it's not very original, the title may not appeal to a lot of readers.

· Cover (3/5)

I thought the cover was simple and I've seen that photo used a few times for other book covers. I'm not saying it's a bad cover, it's just that it wasn't something that completely intrigued me to read your book. I recommend checking out cover shops (*hint hint* Swatches by @herthemuse), if you don't think you can make your own unique covers.

· Description (2/5)

Your description was just one sentence. If I just stumbled across this book on my own, the description was not great. Instead of saying "Assorted series of BTS Oneshots/Scenarios," maybe try elaborating more on the type of stories you write. Try to convince readers why readers should read your book with a good description. With your one sentence, it is already obviously from the title that this is a one shot/scenario book.

· Grammar & Punctuation (20/20)

Grammar and punctuation was fine for the most part. Good job!

· Plot & Story-line (18/20)

I was a little skeptical at first when I read the first few stories. But then I read Seesaw, and I really liked it. The story was interesting and it wasn't cliche like other one shot stories. I realized that your Yoongi one shots were really good. I would have really liked it if you wrote more serious stories with the other members too.

· Pacing (10/10)

I thought the pacing was alright throughout the oneshots. It's a little hard to judge this category for oneshots lol.

· Emotions & Characters (18/20)

I'll focus more one emotions here because I felt like the characters for your oneshots are basically the same for the most part. As I mentioned earlier, I felt the most emotion when reading your Yoongi stories. I'm a heartless person so it's kinda hard for stories to move me. I would have really liked it if I felt more emotions when reading the other member's stories.

· Ending (5/5)

Your endings for your one shots were good overall.

· Personal Enjoyment (4/5)

Personally I love reading oneshots (especially Jungkook ones hehe). I didn't particularly like all of your oneshots but I did enjoy reading some. This is obviously just my personal preference and my opinion doesn't apply to other readers. You're a good writer author-nim and I look forward to your future works!