MATURE!!!
ellie booked ally a gorgeous white limo with drinks and snacks and a pretty hot driver soon enough she arrived at the vine.
ally: *steps out of the limo* wow this place is gorgeous
a huge clear building filled with vine plants and fluorescent lights and the huge fluorescent words painted on the front of the building "the vine"
usher: invitation please
ally: i'm ally stevenson! do you really think i need an invitation?
usher: *moves his sunglasses down from his eyes and looks her up and down* damn! ok you can go on in
ally walks in and sits at the bar
ally: tequila clean, please
bartender: coming right up!
random man across the bar: *waves and whistles at her*
ally: *waves aggressively back at him* heyyyyy
guy: *gets creeped out and walks away*
ally: damn am i that much out of my game?
bartender: here, i think you need this *slides tequila to her* on the house!
ally takes the shot and sighs
another random guy: *sits next to ally* i have to say that was one of the saddest things I've seen in a while
*both laugh*
ally: i know! im extremely embarrassed and i guess i'm just way more out of my game than i thought
random guy: you're really gorgeous you know
ally: *looks him up and down* you're not so bad yourself *winks*
guy: that was way better flirting *laughs* i'm darby by the way
ally: ally, nice to meet you! *shakes hands*
darby: so what's a girl as beautiful as you doing here tonight?
ally: i've been modelling for the past seven years and i haven't had much time to have much of a love life and im finally on my first break in nearly 5 years so i thought it was time to come look for someone, you?
darby: well it is opening night so I guess I should be here
ally: you own this?
darby: yeah! it took a lot of hard work and dedication but we're finally open and we're getting a lot of customers so i guess my hard work was worth it
ally: wow!
ally and darby continued to talk for nearly 2 hours until the bar closed they seemed to get along really well so darby asked her to come back to his house
when they arrived they sat on his couch and watched an old chick flick and just talked for awhile really getting to know each other and getting pretty deep into conversation. while talking about their childhoods and their life experiences they locked hands and eyes. and started to make out. ally excused herself.
she asked for directions to his bathroom and slowly made her way there. when she walked into the bathroom she looked in the mirror and gave herself a pep talk.
ally: *to herself* well ally, we're doing it, we stumbled upon a guy who now knows half of her life story and we're now at his house and we're gonna have sex, ok let's go!
ally: sorry about that, i just wanted to touch up incase
darby: *in a suggestive voice* oh so you wanna have sex?
ally: only if you want to *winks*
darby ran to her pressing their lips together, slowly opening their mouths just enough to let each others tongue slip in, they ran to the couch ripping each others clothes off, their bodies just aching for each other. darby started by slowly tracing his fingertips up ally's back, he felt shivers run up her spine as he delicately unhooked her bra, he then slowly moved down her frontside toward her lower stomach causing her to moan a little, he slowly pulled down her underwear and then she pulled down his jeans to see his tight black boxers, she could see his penis staring at her. it was a good size, she pulled off his boxers and then he decided just to go right for it, no foreplay, straight to the point, normally ally loved a guy who was straightforward but not in the sense that he skips foreplay, anyways, she kept her mouth shut, he slowly inserted himself into her and thrusted, slow and steadily at first but then became faster and more aggressive, both of them letting out small moans. it didn't last long. kind of a quickie and ally didn't finish but, they were both drunk so maybe he just forgot foreplay or something? ally hated vanilla sex. anyways enough about foreplay and everything.
darby: ally? ally! wake up!
*ally laying on a couch completely naked *
ally: *grunts* huh?
darby: uh ally it's um 9:30 i have a business meeting at 10 i really need to get out of here, i had a lot of fun last night and i left my number on the counter, i brewed you a cup of coffee not sure how you like it but the sugar and milk are on the counter i hope to see you soon
ally: oh my god! darby! i am so sorry, oh my god! im really sorry this is very embarrassing, and im- im so sorry that this happened um
darby: no don't be sorry! by the way sex last night kinda sucked, i really need to know the person ,their bodies, what makes them moan. i just don't know what you like and don't like so next time just speak up and tell me, i could tell you didn't finish and you kind of just fell asleep after so i left you alone. anyways if you're up for it tonight maybe I can make it up to you and we could go on another date?
that quote he said "I need to know The person, their bodies, what makes them moan" sounded oddly familiar. *flash back to them kissing* the way he kissed me did too! whatever-. but the fact that he knew that she didn't really have a good time was amazing and maybe he could make it up to her tonight she didn't really know if she wanted to go out with him again but she figured from her hangover they had a pretty good time last night so she decided to give them another chance.
Once darby left she quickly rustled around the floor looking for her clothes she couldn't seem to find them so she ran around the house looking for darby's room, she found it so she took a sweater that said CSU and a pair of gray sweatpants and she quickly grabbed his number off the counter then she found her heels at the door and quickly ran out of his house she called an Uber to the end of his street hopped in and went home.

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Twisted love
Fanfiction! PATRICK DEMPSEY FANFIC ! Ally Stevenson is a model, originally from Seattle, currently living in LA. while on a break from her job, she decides to look for love, what she finds is certainly that, with a huge twist. PATRICKS ENTRANCE IS LATER IN TH...