1. Cover: 9/10 , your cover is absolutely beautiful but a little dark, but I get that cause the girl has a lot of bad memories, man I feel for her.
2. Description/explanation: 8/10 your explaining is very good, but your description is ok but not well explained, example when she bumped into the boy you could have said, I picked up my hard cover books, raising my head up, I'm faced with Harry's Golden blonde hair and that killer jawline and a sharp pointed nose. Or when she walked into class you could have said, I took a step into the white wall painted class room with well waxed wooden chairs and desks, and took my normal seat at the back.
3. Grammar/spelling, punctuation : 10/10 your grammar is very good, a comma is placed where it's needed and a Fullstop is placed at the end of every sentence, Brava keep it up 👍.
Blurb/book short description : 8/10 your blurb is a little too short and doesn't explain the book much it's a great book but your blurb doesn't say so, and at the end add something catchy like will Olivia's life change? Find out on...... "Broken roses...
Readers enjoyment 15/15. I always enjoy the book it's never boring, always interesting, keep up the good work.
Overall score: 50/60%
Broken roses by Jess18ca.
Check it out, great book!
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